Hey, I love the story line but I have one suggestion. Make your sentences flow. Like try to make each one connect using words that transition. You feelin’ me? Other than that awesome!!!! Thanx for putting it on here!
Basically, I am here for one reason. To improve my writing. I would totally appreciate it if people would give me suggestions and help me to further my writing abilities.
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