flute faerie's posted comments

  1. On Peace and Love:

    posted 4 days ago

    I absolutely adore this poem! I love how you say that once a thought is written down it turns into something more. Nice flow and good word usage.

  2. On Tonight :

    posted 4 days ago

    I agree with the above on that it is very lifelike. A very simple story laced with just the right touches. =)

  3. On My Cackling Companion:

    posted 4 days ago

    Haham this reminds me of something my best friend and I would do. I don’t see why she shouldn’t start her own agency. g2, you should sequel.

  4. On The Wonders They Hath Wrought:

    posted 5 days ago

    Whoa buddy, a little scary, but really really good. I love his cynical joy of the smell of the world ending. Nice descriptions and very imaginative story idea!

  5. On Nothing, Just Words:

    posted 5 days ago

    I can relate too, nice poem/story. Definitely a little happy but with a strong taste of sadness left over, almost like an aftertaste. Hope it all works out!

  6. On Tries To Get Help:

    posted 5 days ago

    Agree as well. Nice sequel. This’ll be a great series!

  7. On Taken Over:

    posted 5 days ago

    Whoa, reminds me a little of The Host, an invader in your body, in your head. But definitely scarier!

  8. On Part 5:

    posted 5 days ago

    I’ve also been wondering (oday actually) how you tell if you are right or love someone. Definitely don’t go out with a boy that hurts you, and as far as the two others, I’m not sure. Guys are complicated (and pigs).

  9. On Part 4:

    posted 5 days ago

    You don’t have to edit these. Some Ficlets are better with their raw emotion =)

  10. On Part 2:

    posted 5 days ago

    Hmm, interesting start to a series. Can’t wait to see where you go with this. Sorry if this is really happening!

  11. On Thank You:

    posted 5 days ago

    I love people who are there for you in the lowest points in your life, and this is a great poem thanking them. =)

  12. On Freshmen Freak Out (Haunted House Challenge):

    posted 5 days ago

    {My source was The Folklore of Florida Southern College by Alexander M. Bruce}

  13. On Never Stop Smiling: The Story of My Life (6 Word Memoir Challenge):

    posted 5 days ago

    Aw, that’s sweet. Smiling is a great thing to do.

  14. On Strange indeed:

    posted 5 days ago

    Wow, that’s a really beautiful story. I like how it is just her and nature. I also thought you had some great adjectives in there.

  15. On Mom Knows It Too:

    posted 6 days ago

    lol, I did too. I like the style of the poem, and the repeated line for emphasis.

  16. On Shakespeare's Cursed Grave Challenge : Alas I Knew Him Well:

    posted 6 days ago

    Oh dear, that was scary, but really really well described. Of course, I would expect no less from u lol. Good entry!

  17. On Thou Hast a Most Wretched Potty-Mouth (Shakespeare's Cursed Grave):

    posted 6 days ago

    Cool idea! Nice use of the old Shakespearian (sp?)/ medieval dialect.

  18. On Midnight Sun :

    posted 6 days ago

    Guys, she might not publish Midnight Sun because she’s upset bout the spoilers. Isn’t that tragic? Team Edward!

  19. On The Last Night of a Married Man:

    posted 6 days ago

    Hmmm I agree about the confusing part but then again I’m a blonde and get confused all the time lol. Sounds like a good series starter though.

  20. On The Haunted House Challenge :

    posted 6 days ago

    MUAHAHAHA this is my kinda challenge. My 7th grade research report was on assorted haunted houses in the US. Great challenge!

  21. On The Adjective Challenge! :

    posted 6 days ago

    Congratulations! I definitely want to enter!

  22. On rain on the windshield:

    posted 6 days ago

    nice analogy =)

  23. On I challenge you! Write your life in six words.:

    posted 6 days ago

    Yay! I love Ernest Hemmingway!

  24. On DaD (a sequel):

    posted 6 days ago

    Wow, it’s amazing how times have changed, isn’t it?

  25. On The Macarena:

    posted 4 months ago

    Srry, I dont know if flirtilly is a word, but oh well. Now it is!

  26. On I Want To Be A Hero (When I Grow Up Challenge):

    posted 4 months ago

    Ya, I agree with that. Everyone thinks growing up is just a big reality check. Who knows. But this was a really good story, with a very good hidden moral. I think you could be a hero if you wanted to. Nothing is impossible!

  27. On Saint Chuck's When I Grow Up Challenge [100 Ficlets]:

    posted 4 months ago

    Oh, and congrats!

  28. On Saint Chuck's When I Grow Up Challenge [100 Ficlets]:

    posted 4 months ago

    This is a funny coincindence, we’re doing a research report on our dream career in english right now.

  29. On Island Life [When I Grow Up Challenge]:

    posted 4 months ago

    Man, if only we could all do this. Of course, I would exchange the hot wife for hot husband, but you know… great entry!

  30. On It Wasn't Funny [Make Me Laugh Challenge]:

    posted 4 months ago

    lol, that was really funny. I wonder what he did with that balloon…

  31. On LOVE IS JUST TOO MUCH!:

    posted 4 months ago

    I’m sure another door will open soon!

  32. On The Kiss:

    posted 4 months ago

    Awww, this makes my heart ache for the day I will receive my first kiss! (no, I haven’t had it yet, no one laugh) I love how you made it sound so perfect.

  33. On Liar:

    posted 4 months ago

    Ooo, good point. It’s sometimes hard to know when to trust ppl.

  34. On Brian and Gwen:

    posted 4 months ago

    Aww, sounds like a nice relationship.

  35. On Seeing Your Ex:

    posted 4 months ago

    Oh dear!!

  36. On Hand-in-Hand:

    posted 5 months ago

    Awww, how sweet. I’m so jealous of Lilly right now, lol.

  37. On Lilith's Song {Twilight Challenge}:

    posted 5 months ago

    That was really nice!!

  38. On Currents [Twilight Challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    Aww, how sweeeet!! Great use of the quote!

  39. On Twilight Challange(140) {CLICK THE BUTTON!!! DOOO ITTTT!!!!}:

    posted 5 months ago

    Omg!!!!! Twilight!!!!! Yes!!! I am so totally entering. Best challenge eva!!

  40. On Flute Faerie's Nice Challenge:

    posted 5 months ago

    Aww, thanks a bunch! You are awesome, and I’m really sorry I’ve been gone and I’m going to sequel right now!!

  41. On Make Them True:

    posted 5 months ago

    Sorry , I haven’t been on for a week. Hmmm, this is gonna b tough to follow. It was really good.

  42. On Say Something Nice Challenge:

    posted 5 months ago

    Tehehe, he is a beast. And I agree, Pens&Feathers does write very inspiring work.

  43. On I Guess I'll Be Nice (Nice Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    Lol I used to think Saint Chuck was a guy as well. It’s interesting how people can surprise you.

  44. On You Have to Be Nice Sometimes (Nice Things Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    This was really nice, and judging from the comments above you made a lot of people smile. Which is awesome!

  45. On A Few of My Favorite Ficleteers{Nice things challenge":

    posted 5 months ago

    O_M plays the flute?? No way!!

  46. On My entry for the Nice Things Challenge:

    posted 5 months ago

    Awww, good job of mentioning a lot of people!

  47. On Afterglow [poem]:

    posted 5 months ago

    This was a great continuation of your other poem. It sounds like the perfect, beautiful storm. I just hope the storm doesn’t hurt.

  48. On Forbidden Fruit [poem]:

    posted 5 months ago

    ‘Forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest’ tehehe. This is really pretty, very descriptive, and mucho fabuloso! I just read the companion to this, so I’m gonna go comment on that one now.

  49. On Ficlet Nirvana (Flute Faerie's Nice Things Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    Huzzah to everyone mentioned! Everything you said was totally true. Thanks for entering!

  50. On Mama Always Said It's Important To Be Nice [The Nice Things Challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    Lol, I like the hint hint. That’s cool that one of your students got you into it. Maybe I should talk to my english teacher hmm… thanks for entering!

  51. On the truth about uselessness [(Your Pen Name Here) Challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    Nice back-story of a very interesting pen name. Very imaginitive, and funny.

  52. On The Everyday THX 0477 [Pen Name Challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    Wow, talk about utopia! Sounds like ThX has it all, from a choir to bugs bunny slippers!! lol. Sounds like an awesome life for the leader of the Leauge of Awesomeness.

  53. On Colours:

    posted 5 months ago

    Wow, that was fabulous! Great descriptions!

  54. On Being Kermitgorf (Tad's pen name challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    Tehehe, very cool, but the last part was genius! I love how he’s playing chess with his cat Stovohobo. That was hilarious!

  55. On Margie's Flashback:

    posted 5 months ago

    That would be really scary. Like Russell said, it was funny how he always knew where they were. This is great!

  56. On The Turncoat Suitor:

    posted 5 months ago

    Wow, this was heavy, but really good. It reminds me of a movie or something.

  57. On Life As Melia [(Your Pen Name Here) Challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    Wow, this was awesome. I love the imagery to the way you ties in her ficlets to her life. I loved the cherry fanta part, that was really funny.

  58. On Some Very nice things (FluteFaries: NIce things Challenge) :

    posted 5 months ago

    = ) nicities is a cool word. And yes, I agree with wytherwings, THX is awesome, like the league. Thanks for brightening people’s day!

  59. On Nice Things (Flute Faerie's Challenge):

    posted 5 months ago

    This was a nice entry, I like your descriptions of why the people are so cool. Thanks for entering!

  60. On I am Invisable (Anima):

    posted 6 months ago

    Aww, how sweet that she’s so excited!

  61. On I am Slut (Brit):

    posted 6 months ago

    Ooooh, I wonder if she would ever go out with him? This is a really good series!!

  62. On Via I-M (28):

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, that’s hilarious! I wonder what she’s gonna say nxt.

  63. On Macy 29: Celebrate:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, Derrick is so awesome! And I’m glad Macy finally stood up for herself.

  64. On Macy 26: Leave When He's There:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oooohh, burn! W2g Derrick!

  65. On Running Outta Space!! ((Nice Challenge)):

    posted 6 months ago

    Thanks for deciding to enter! You wrote a lot of nice stuff that I’m sure made ppl happy.

  66. On The Nice Challenge! [My Entry]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Thanks for spreading some smiles today!

  67. On I Love you Guys! Nice Things Challenge Part 2:

    posted 6 months ago

    Way to try and include everyone!

  68. On I Love you Guys! Nice Things Challenge Part 1:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, you guyz are giving out such sweet stories! Thanks for entering Blu!

  69. On Be Nice! (Nice Things challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Thanks for entering! I hope you didn’t miss too much of your class!

  70. On Too Many To Name...But All Loved {nice things}:

    posted 6 months ago

    This was really nice and heartfelt. Thanks for entering!

  71. On Via I-M (27):

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, I wonder how it looked.

  72. On Via I-M (26):

    posted 6 months ago

    Aww, poor Jason. But yay for Kmart!

  73. On Via I-M (24):

    posted 6 months ago

    Sweet! This is soo good!

  74. On Via I-M (20):

    posted 6 months ago

    Yeah, you can do it Kmartluvr!

  75. On Via I-M (18):

    posted 6 months ago

    awww, nooo!

  76. On PAY NO ATTENTION TO THE FICLETEER BEHIND THE CURTAIN!!! (Flute Faerie's Nice Things Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Thanks for entering! It was nice to mention some other ppl as well, because everyone deserves something!

  77. On Nice things to say (Flute Faerie challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Thanks for entering, and trying to squeeze everyone in there. You’ve made ppl happy today!

  78. On So Many to Pick From! (Flute Faerie's Niceness Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Thnx for entering my challenge! I know, it’s so hard to pick. I think you did great!

  79. On Well...{ Flute Faerie's Nice-ness challange}:

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, you scared me at the beginning. Thanks for entering, I’m sure you brightened someone’s day!

  80. On Nice Things for Awesome Ficleteers (Flute Faerie's nice comment challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Yay Kevin! Thanks so much for entering my challenge, and writing so much nice stuff!

  81. On Via I-M (17):

    posted 6 months ago

    Oh no! They can’t break up! They were such a cute couple!

  82. On Via I-M (15):

    posted 6 months ago

    Oh dear, this is heating up fast!

  83. On Awesome ficleteers (flute faerie's Nice Things challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Aww, thnx. Great job on trying to fit everyone in there. Thanks foe entering!

  84. On The Oder of LoA( Flute Faeries Nice Comment Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Ooooh, wow, ten people! And in a fabulous story too. Nice entry!

  85. On Trying to be NICE! [flute faerie's Comment Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Thanks for entering! Wow, seven people, that’s awesome.

  86. On flute faerie's 1000th Comment Challenge, The Nice Things Challenge! :

    posted 6 months ago

    I changed it to three. Five’s still a lot.

  87. On Easy on the Sauce:

    posted 6 months ago

    Tehehe, I like this guy already.

  88. On Via I-M (13):

    posted 6 months ago

    Oh snap! That’s baaad.

  89. On Via I-M (11):

    posted 6 months ago

    Awwwww, this is soooooo cute!

  90. On Via I-M (9):

    posted 6 months ago

    Poor poor Ed!

  91. On Via I-M (6):

    posted 6 months ago

    What do guys doodle? that’s a good question.

  92. On Via I-M (4):

    posted 6 months ago

    What a cuuute couple!

  93. On Via I-M (2):

    posted 6 months ago

    This is a sweet series!

  94. On Via I-M:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awwww, that’s so sweet!!!!

  95. On I am Nerd (Vaughn):

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, geez, she just doesn’t get it does she? Lol, at least he had the guts to compliment her.

  96. On I am Anima (Invisable):

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, how sweet!

  97. On I am Brit (Slut) (woohoo, unintentional nirvana!):

    posted 6 months ago

    Ooooh, spicy! Lol, jk.

  98. On I am Slut II:

    posted 6 months ago

    Ooooh, more drama.

  99. On I Am Nerd II:

    posted 6 months ago

    I’m just a band geek, lol.

  100. On I am Invisable:

    posted 6 months ago

    I love how he knows everything about everyone and no one would ever expect it.

  101. On I Am Nerd:

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, thats funny. Sounds really realistic. I just now came upon this series, so srry I sorta missed the boat. I’m catching up though.

  102. On Finally peace:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like bittersweet. It fits. I like how much feeling there is for such a small story.

  103. On Regrets or Rewards?:

    posted 6 months ago

    Hmmm, interesting question. I’d say the middle road would be my choice.

  104. On Madison's Fantasy World:

    posted 6 months ago

    Good sequel. I have to think of something good now.

  105. On The Case:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, that’s sad. I hope everything turns out ok.

  106. On Oooooooohhhh great!!:

    posted 6 months ago

    Tehehe, Jeff Dunham.

  107. On If only it were this easy! -or- Education by Osmosis:

    posted 6 months ago

    If only if only, lol. This would be an awesome idea for teachers, beause I’m sure it’s hard sometimes.

  108. On Poison [A Sequel to my Entry for Elsha's Mirror Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, so, so deep. My eyes are welling up. Great display of emotion, and a good job of having the reader almost feel the pain. Awesome sequel.

  109. On Driver Took Sick:

    posted 6 months ago

    Hmmm, I hope the advil cures him!

  110. On Just In Time:

    posted 6 months ago

    I hope Martin’s ok!

  111. On False Alarm.. No exit:

    posted 6 months ago

    Uh-oh, this can’t be good.

  112. On Late Afternoon:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oh dear, the ending scares me.

  113. On Later That Day :

    posted 6 months ago

    Really cute, I like how he was trying to find a station for her and everything.

  114. On Goodbye, Madison (MBTM Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Hehe, I like how well this flowed. Poor girl, the guy probably doesn’t even comprehend what she’s saying.

  115. On On Being Wil Wheaton (Tad's Pen Name Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Sweet, this is cool. I like the dog at the end.

  116. On Underwater World: Eaten Alive [Living descriptions challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, sounds like a beautiful cave. I like all your colorful descriptions, and how you added a problem at the end. Oh, and another thing: I wrote a poem once and named it underwater world. It’s a good title ;p

  117. On (Your Pen Name Here) CHALLENGE:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yay, you’re here! Cool challenge, I must think of who my victim will be * muahahaha * no I’m just kidding I’ll be sure to write something nice.

  118. On When life gives you lemons, don't squeeze the juice in your eyes!:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like how you twisted the saying to fit the story. This was really cool!

  119. On When Life Gives You Lemons....wait, I hate lemons!:

    posted 6 months ago

    Sounds painful!

  120. On the believer {64k challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, this is really nice, and very beautiful. You can just see it, in all its glory.

  121. On Growing Statistics:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, this makes you realize that life’s not all rainbows and sugar plums. That bad stuff is happening, and it’s starting to increase. It makes me wanna tell everyone to just make peace and be caring, and to stop being so hurtful.

  122. On I Am:

    posted 6 months ago

    Life’s like that sometimes, and I’ve felt the same way before.

  123. On The Exodus:

    posted 6 months ago

    Whoa, cool futuristic story. I like the thought of an ambush on the gov by a group of 6 ppl. But I betcha they could probably do it.

  124. On Brush N' Dry:

    posted 6 months ago

    Aaaaah, keep going! I wanna know what the judge says! But I don’t mean to rush you. This a fab series.

  125. On Scrub!:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yay! Go Em!

  126. On Lemon Juice!:

    posted 6 months ago

    go go go! You can do it!

  127. On Don't Take Her Away:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awwwwwww

  128. On The Final Decison:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, forget the media, let her go with them!

  129. On For Real This Time:

    posted 6 months ago

    Double Awwwwwww!

  130. On Macy 25: Leave Because I Want You To:

    posted 6 months ago

    Why does he have to be such a jerk?

  131. On Macy 24: Macon's Visit:

    posted 6 months ago

    Go Derrick go!

  132. On Wobbles: The Penguin that got Poked:

    posted 6 months ago

    I’m glad that penguins are now learning self defense these days. Poor Wobbles sounds like he could use it. And this is very original, as said above.

  133. On The Flying Lie:

    posted 6 months ago

    I liked the part about Mcdonalds too. Very true, and very funny. This was a very enjoyable ficlet.

  134. On The Corridor And The Rose-Petrified:

    posted 6 months ago

    Hmmm, intriguing. What has she and her group done to get killed, I wonder?

  135. On The Corridor And The Rose:

    posted 6 months ago

    Nice series starter. Really interesting and descriptive.

  136. On The Number 3, Dale Pays a Visit (Conversations With Dead People Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Better yet, NASCAR is awesome.

  137. On Chat with Gran (Conversations with the dead Challenge) :

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, very nice, emotional entry. You got tears to well in my eyes. I like how it’s more like you telling her things than an actual conversation. It’s all very sincere and beautiful. And, doubling THX, very heartfelt.

  138. On Good Morning, Sunshine! (Mirror Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    I like all the detail, and how realistic this is.

  139. On Visitations of a Pointless Nature [Conversations with Dead People Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Nice conversation, very funny “airy” joke, and even funnier: a perverted ghost. I loved this.

  140. On When Life Gives You Lemons... Throw Them At Monkeys!!!!!!!!:

    posted 6 months ago

    What did the monkeys do to you? Lol, jk. Good imagination.

  141. On Bad news for him, Good for Her:

    posted 6 months ago

    Ooooh, this is good. I hope Macy doesn’t end up getting hurt!

  142. On Shake It Off:

    posted 6 months ago

    Uh-oh. That can’t b good!

  143. On Another Brick In the Wall:

    posted 6 months ago

    I’m sure she’ll make it through.

  144. On D2B48C (Tan):

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, I hope he does it!

  145. On Macy 23: Truth:

    posted 6 months ago

    That’s so sweet!

  146. On Confessions:

    posted 6 months ago

    Whoa, awesome concept. The last line was sorta like the icing on the cake.

  147. On The End:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yeah, I got curious too. Sounds like a very beautiful end, sad but ethereal.

  148. On Secret:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, how sweet! I love the way he asked her!

  149. On Breaking Heart (64k Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, this reminds me a little of one of my friends. She can’t sleep or get over this one boy. Very nicely written.

  150. On Days Like These:

    posted 6 months ago

    Days like those are tough. But ouch, a manhole? That would have to hurt, especially after stepping on a nail earlier.

  151. On Red :

    posted 6 months ago

    Ya, I agree w/ THX. You didn’t overload it, but you explained just enough. It’s sad how she is relating the color of the tree to the color of her blood on the tile, but it fits well with the picture and the story. I hope she’s alright.

  152. On Upsidewards Chapter 11:

    posted 6 months ago

    Hmmm, where are the other guyz. This is a really good series.

  153. On Upsidewards Chapter 10:

    posted 6 months ago

    Cool, battle!

  154. On Upsidewards Chapter 9:

    posted 6 months ago

    Ooooh, do I sense a plot?

  155. On Whales Tales:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yay whales!

  156. On The Loss of Lucille:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, that’s so sweet, so
    elegant. That’s so sad that she never got to tell him she loved him. This was very powerful.

  157. On Orange Salvation:

    posted 6 months ago

    Whoa, totally wasn’t expecting that last part. I like how the story went from an orange, to hair, to a grenade. That was cool.

  158. On Winter [JP's Smell Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Hmmm, I wish I could be in the cold right now. Very good descriptions.

  159. On Tsunami:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like how you described it before and after the storm. I actually felt like I was in the middle of one.

  160. On 808080 (Grey):

    posted 6 months ago

    I bet he can do it if he builds up the confidence. He has four days to do it.

  161. On The Cow That Doesn't Tip:

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, ya it is sorta poetic…

  162. On translation for "Sueños":

    posted 6 months ago

    Aww, it was still really beautiful, even in english. I love all the sweet emotion in it.

  163. On He'll Remember Me Forever:

    posted 6 months ago

    Gasp! I don’t think his son would want to remember him like that! His son is probably going to be humilated now. And the poor father, I think the pressure has driven him mad. Really good story.

  164. On Cheaters Anonymous Member (Set Sentence Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, of course it was the lines. And I think they had a very good idea ;]

  165. On Shop Til You Drop From Laughing:

    posted 6 months ago

    Good sequel! I have an idea for later on in the series… and I think the title’s cool.

  166. On And This Is Why I Don't Date Stupid Asses {Set sentences}:

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, I guess that would be weird if someone wanted to paint your portrait with mayonnaise. I would probably put a restraining order on him lol.

  167. On Demon Love (sentence challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    That’s a cool idea for a story. I love the set up of these characters, and I thought you worked really well with the guidlines that were given.

  168. On Life's Definition (64K challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Wowzers, good debatable ficlet.

  169. On Come With Me:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, that’s a really sweet poem. It has a nice flow, and a nice message.

  170. On The Dance (mirror challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    I like how it’s the perspective of someone else looking in on someone who’s looking at a mirror. I think it’s nice how she’s unsatisfied, then confident. Then the last line tells you that she’s still a little unsure, which I love. The last line was absolutely brilliant.

  171. On dear dumb diary...:

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, I’m sure all the drivers were jealous. I love how he’s afraid of being not manly.

  172. On Missing one Purpose.:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yay, I got a mention! See, this is my bestest friend in the whole wide world! She’s awesome and so is her story.

  173. On When Life Gives You Lemons, Pucker Up (The "When Life Gives You Lemons" Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    I like the way you incoroprated the phrase into your story, like a moral. This sorta reminds me of the beginning of the book So Yesterday by Scott Westerfeld. That was one good book.

  174. On Skin Deep [Elsha's Mirror Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like the different way you wrote it from the mirror’s perspective, but you still managed to tell the story beautifully, and sadly.

  175. On Mirror Image:

    posted 6 months ago

    That would be scary and upsetting! You help your poor self out and look where it gets you! Maybe he’s your evil twin or something.

  176. On (I Can't Get No) Satisfaction:

    posted 6 months ago

    Very, very nice last line.

  177. On I Don't Like Mondays:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oooh, wonder what’s gonna happen nxt!

  178. On Life Can Now Begin:

    posted 6 months ago

    Really good Ficlet, very deep. It’s not easy to forget.

  179. On This is WAR, E!!:

    posted 6 months ago

    Ummmm…. well… can’t you ujst be king and queen of corniness or something? Just a suggestion.

  180. On Interview with a zombie:

    posted 6 months ago

    This is a really funny and interesting series. You guys are a good team!

  181. On Upsidewards Chapter 8:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oooh, sounds like quite a hard task to me.

  182. On Burn! :

    posted 6 months ago

    Ooooh, that’s a burn!

  183. On Schizoaffective, Like Me:

    posted 6 months ago

    Total and complete randomness. Wow!

  184. On Lilly's Life:

    posted 6 months ago

    K Freedom, ur turn :)

  185. On Macy 22: Liar:

    posted 6 months ago

    Shane’s horrible, Derrick’s a hero, and I feel really bad for Macy, but I’m glad she dumped him!

  186. On Upsidewards Chapter 7:

    posted 6 months ago

    Daaaang, that would be torture. His own brothers…wow.

  187. On Upsidewards Chapter 6:

    posted 6 months ago

    I agree, you are a good storyteller.

  188. On The Adventure Begins:

    posted 6 months ago

    I love mcr!

  189. On When Life Gives You Lemons, Throw Them At People (100th Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, I was thinking of doing this title. This is much funnier tan mine would have been though. I love how she purposely annoys ppl.

  190. On Fading:

    posted 6 months ago

    Good picture of yet another girl on her horrible quest to achieve that surreal perfectness of beauty. I really like how vivid the descriptions are.

  191. On A Mirror Image {Elsha's Mirror Challenge}:

    posted 6 months ago

    Thanks THX!

  192. On Always:

    posted 6 months ago

    Srry, my computer keeps posting my stuff twice.

  193. On Always:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like the fantasy sense of walking into the mirror, and how you can practically feel what it’s like. Good descriptions.

  194. On Always:

    posted 6 months ago

    Whoa, cool fantasy sense, the part about about walking into the mirror. I like how you can almost feel it.

  195. On Macy 21: Standing Up:

    posted 6 months ago

    Way to finally stand up for yourself Macy!

  196. On Macy 20: So-called Love:

    posted 6 months ago

    What idiots! Both of them! How could they!?

  197. On Macy 18: Different World:

    posted 6 months ago

    Dude, Macy needs to get off the fantasy boat express!

  198. On Macy 15: Waiting:

    posted 6 months ago

    Just when her and Derek were spending some quality time!

  199. On Macy 14: Going Out:

    posted 6 months ago

    Ya, ppl always talk, so u might as well live it up while u can!

  200. On Macy 13: I Don't Know:

    posted 6 months ago

    Buuuuurn!

  201. On Macy 12: Art Issues:

    posted 6 months ago

    How can Macon be so cruel!

  202. On Macy 9: Oh Joy:

    posted 6 months ago

    I’m betting on Derek!

  203. On Macy 8: Poem To My Heart:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awwww, this is sooooo good!

  204. On Macy 6: Goodbye Shane:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yeah Macy!!!

  205. On Macy 5: Boyfriend:

    posted 6 months ago

    oh no! poor girl!

  206. On Macy 4: Make Your Move:

    posted 6 months ago

    this is really cute, but…something’s not right with this girl.

  207. On Macy 2: Love At First Sight:

    posted 6 months ago

    awww how sweet!

  208. On Upsidewards Chapter 5:

    posted 6 months ago

    Whoa, a strange twist in a great story. But why would the government kidnap kids?

  209. On Secret Room (Elisha's Mirror Challenge) :

    posted 6 months ago

    That would be fun, playing imagination with a mirror. I really like the idea of this story.

  210. On Mirror, Mirror{Elsha's Mirror Challenge}:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, very powerful, very emotional. It’s sad when people feel that way about their appearance.

  211. On Singing (64k Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, so true.

  212. On Too Quick:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oooooohh, bummer! Poor, poor Drew.

  213. On Prom is Coming...:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, poor Drew! I feel sooo bad for him!

  214. On The Pitch:

    posted 6 months ago

    This was histerical! I loved the exasperated editor. The last sentence was hilarious.

  215. On Upsiderwards Chapter 4:

    posted 6 months ago

    oooh, so there’s more that were kidnaped.

  216. On Barely There [Elsha's Mirror Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    That’s really emotional, and I love the focus on her eyes. They sound more like the mirror than the actual mirror.

  217. On Never learned how to wink:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, too bad she doesn’t know how.

  218. On Upsidewards Chapter 3:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oooh, and the action continues. I wonder where he is.

  219. On Considering:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, that’s really sweet. A nice thought, that the people we love and lost are up there watching us, sending us signs.

  220. On Upsidewards Chapter 2:

    posted 6 months ago

    oh dear, well that can’t be good.

  221. On upsidewards chapter 1:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yikes, that would be scary.

  222. On Out of the dark:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oh. My. Gosh. That’s soooo freaky! I love the details, but yikes, that gives me the shivers!

  223. On Silence (64k challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, that’s so sweet and sad. I love it.

  224. On A Challenge!:

    posted 6 months ago

    Sweet! I ♥ wikihow!

  225. On Morning Ritual [OM's word challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Tehehe, nice story about a girl getting ready for an exciting day.

  226. On So Random, It had to be a Dream {OM's Word Challenge}:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, that’s cool how you used all the words.

  227. On A toy That Saves the World (Word Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    Ooooh, makes you wonder, and wanting more!

  228. On Putting Things Off in Mirror Land [Elsha's Mirror Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    I was wondering the same thing about the box, it sorta confused me. But ya, it is sad that he thinks of himself that way.

  229. On The Last To Bet:

    posted 6 months ago

    I think it meant mentally wandered. Very cool story.

  230. On Arrival:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like the setting, and I would love to travel that way. This guy sounds like an investigator of some sort. Neat story!

  231. On Hex Conversion:

    posted 6 months ago

    Nice twist. Poor guy though, all that excitement for nothing. I hope he asks her out!

  232. On Hex Conversion:

    posted 6 months ago

    Nice twist. Poor guy though, all that excitement for nothing. I hope he asks her out!

  233. On 008000:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like this series, it’s really good.

  234. On Best Sermon Ever (My Inner Cynic Wrote This): [64k Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    I like the feeling of humor, mystery, and a puzzle behind this. It’s really good.

  235. On The Mischievous Marquee (Living Descriptions Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    This is really creative, and it got me laughing really hard.

  236. On Possibility:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oooh, sounds like a match to me lol.

  237. On Squinting Mistake :

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww poor Jeremy. I can’t wait to see what happens next.

  238. On Room 235:

    posted 6 months ago

    I really like this!

  239. On Leather Pants:

    posted 6 months ago

    Lol, that’s hilarious!

  240. On Ogres Don't Just Exist in Fairy Tales:

    posted 6 months ago

    Oh no! Poor Charlie!

  241. On Winning Point ((THX's defensive challenge)):

    posted 6 months ago

    Nice story about a simple game of kickball, which is the best game ever!

  242. On Miracle Spectacle :

    posted 6 months ago

    Nice little poem. Has a good ring to it.

  243. On Imprinted in my memory.:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, that’s so sad! Did the daddy die in the ocean?

  244. On Dead in my Chest:

    posted 6 months ago

    Uh-uh. I hope she’s alright!

  245. On The Little Girl On The Board:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, I hope she lives!

  246. On Message In A Bottle:

    posted 6 months ago

    Bum Bum Bum… what’s it say??? Is she even gonna read it??

  247. On Girls Just Wanna Have Fun:

    posted 6 months ago

    I think she and Charlie would make a good couple.

  248. On Heartbreak Hotel:

    posted 6 months ago

    Yay Charlie!

  249. On Smells Like Teen Spirit:

    posted 6 months ago

    I agree, I want to know more. This guy seems like a total jerk.

  250. On Graduation:

    posted 6 months ago

    Poor guy. He’s gonna miss all his friends and hang out spots. Nice little story.

  251. On i dont call this living.:

    posted 6 months ago

    It’s cool, and it has a nice flow to it.

  252. On debris:

    posted 6 months ago

    This is a cool story, and I would like to know more about this girl and her life. You should sequel.

  253. On Mirror Mirror... [Elsha's Mirror Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wowzers, very good description, and a cool concept at the end.

  254. On Tears and a Monster (Elsha's Mirror Challenge):

    posted 6 months ago

    wow, that’s a really good story. I like how it’s all one paragraph, it really works for this story.

  255. On Family Now:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, way to capture the emotion!

  256. On You're Not That Girl I Met In A Snowstorm:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, poor Wes! She’s so tough!

  257. On Where The Stairwell Leads [escape challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    Good sequel!

  258. On Love:

    posted 6 months ago

    Good poem. Oh, and I forgot to mention; welcome to Ficlets!

  259. On Will you be faithful:

    posted 6 months ago

    Hmmm, good question. It seems to be able to apply to a wide range of people (bf’s, friends, etc.) which is really cool.

  260. On Final Decision:

    posted 6 months ago

    Whoa, that was really emotional. I’m almost crying. This was a great series. If anyone else had done this ending I would have called them crazy, but it somehow seems to fit perfectly with the story. Really nice final Ficlet.

  261. On my love, my heart, is yours:

    posted 6 months ago

    I agree with THX. Very powerful and painful, and I would like to know more.

  262. On On Growing Up:

    posted 6 months ago

    Wow, I like this. It really makes me wonder. Very good question worked into a wonderful ficlet.

  263. On Seven Day Journal: Day Two (Camille):

    posted 6 months ago

    You altar serve? That’s cool, so do a lot of my friends.

  264. On Why Not The Cweek?:

    posted 6 months ago

    Awww, poor little girl!! That’s so sad! You should sequel.

  265. On Worth It:

    posted 6 months ago

    Nicely said. I feel the same way sometimes.

  266. On Stuck With The Stuffed [Escape Challenge]:

    posted 6 months ago

    I’m srry THX! I had an idea in while I was writing this, but I didn’t think I could fit it. Alas, I guess I could. So someone plzz sequel!

  267. On