Ficlets | Dragon_sun 515's posted comments

On Random song that popped into my head. Really sucks, you probably don't want to read it, I just wanted to write it down before I forgot or something.:

posted about 1 month ago

I like it. Of course, I didn’t have the tune but…. I still like it.

Sorry, this is gonna bug me, I think you spelled a couple words wrong. If not, well I’m not the brightest crayon. :)

On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia: New Jersey Edition:

posted about 1 month ago

I love it! And, I’m sorry, but I must disagree with Mask By The Moon on one point. While this is awesome, it has not yet topped the Guide. May I point out that the Guide even outsold The Encyclopedia Galactica! Teehee. Unless, of course, you’re talking about some other guide. Then ignore me.

On Fallen Angel (Pt. 9):

posted about 1 month ago

You stopped again! Boo! Oh well. Good series! Can’t wait to see what happens next.

On destiny....:

posted about 1 month ago

What? Ive been gone for a month and this is where you end it? NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! I want to know what’s up with the hot elf! teehee

On He explains ... kind of.:

posted about 1 month ago

What’s up with everyone? This series is interesting to say the least.

On Where the heck AM I?!:

posted about 1 month ago

Yay! Family drama on top of everything. Her therapist will never believe this….

On NEW QUIZ!!!:

posted about 1 month ago

Can’t resist. Bored out of mind. Trying to get back on track after not being on ficlets for a month. This’ll be good to get the creative juices flowing.

On They can't win if they can't score. (defensive challenge):

posted 2 months ago

I realized it was soccer but the might be because I actually play! And YAY! They won! The gramatical structure could use a bit of work, though.

On Golden Renewal:

posted 3 months ago

Teehee. A long-lost sister, eh? You just keep adding these twists! :)

On Cindy Lou Comes Clean:

posted 3 months ago

I’m going to be brutally honest: I don’t know why I’m so hooked on this series! It’s….strange. But so appealing. I can’t wait to see what happens with him and Cindy Lou.

On Dead Innocent Meat:

posted 3 months ago

Ah! This will be tough to sequel. Any ideas?

On A poem:

posted 3 months ago

I agree with paper flowers: Look at what? And I once again agree with her: I’m confuzzled!

On Finale:

posted 3 months ago

I loved it! I didn’t think it aws that long it took me so short an amount of time to read it. Wonderful series.

On Doesn't It Hurt?:

posted 3 months ago

Woah. I like it. It seems really real and I can see the pain behind it.

On The Box [Lailah]:

posted 3 months ago

Oh sure now there’s no more for me to read. A wellplaced cliffhanger’s just the thing to drive me carzy til you write some more.

On You Ate My Pizza!:

posted 4 months ago

I’m shocked! It didn’t just magically come from the sky! Gasps!

On Angels Don't Like Pizza:

posted 4 months ago

Well, with the exception of Sir Sebastian who was riding a llama. (There weren’t enough horses for all of them.)
Ha!! I love llamas! They rule! This has got to be one of my favorite series!

On Angels Don't Like Pizza:

posted 4 months ago

Well, with the exception of Sir Sebastian who was riding a llama. (There weren’t enough horses for all of them.)
Ha!! I love llamas! They rule! This has got to be one of my favorite series!

On I Am Nerd II:

posted 4 months ago

I’d like to speak in the defence of all nerds that we are not like that. I’m more likely to be thinking about science than math. Duh!

Good series though. Can’t wait to read the next one.

On The Super Happy, Slightly Wacky, Very Crappy Awesome Song!:

posted 4 months ago

This made me laugh. I love the chorus.

On A Match Made in Hallway N304:

posted 4 months ago

He sounds way too much like my friends…
except they’re girls. But oh well. Can’t wait to see what happens and I’m curious about third grade.

On Life Without Music Isn't:

posted 4 months ago

Wow, I finally found someone else who likes Kenny Chesney and will admit it. Although, The killers are better.

On Off to Snickleforgabomshilifondo!:

posted 4 months ago

I love how if one goes the other has to and if she goes the other has to… lol.

On Oh no, how'd I get involved in this mess?:

posted 4 months ago

She does seem to be always eating. Although I’m becoming a bit partial to Rainn myself.

On Just A Little Complicated:

posted 4 months ago

Wow. That’s all I can say right now. I can’t wait to see what happens to Cynthia. The way you show speech is a little different but ok.

On Just A Little Complicated:

posted 4 months ago

Wow. That’s all I can say right now. I can’t wait to see what happens to Cynthia. The way you show speech is a little different but ok.

On I've Got Two Words For You....:

posted 4 months ago

What the? So, it’s common for reptiles and amphibians to pop out of people’s eyes? Coolness.

On Death of Romance:

posted 4 months ago

To true. There’s a couple grammatical errors but I think I get what you’re trying to get across.

On Dog Daze:

posted 4 months ago

I love it! Although I can’t say stucked. I’m trying and trying but I can’t say it.

On Shakespeare Academy:

posted 4 months ago

Crazy lady say what!
Ha! And did you want to say exasperated or exhausted?

On a diamond ring :

posted 4 months ago

Why not?
Gosh darn it this is frustrating.

On The Secret Is Out.:

posted 4 months ago

Drama much?
lol. I like it.

On Urinals Are Scary Things:

posted 4 months ago

Paul! I never would’ve guessed you’d write that! lol.

On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia:

posted 4 months ago

Nasty! You’d think the egyptians could’ve found a better way. And go Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy!!!!! Oh, and I knew girls were better than guys. :)

On A Mission :

posted 4 months ago

I love the way you write, paper flowers! It’s hilarious and I can’t wait to see how they acomplish (sp?) the task!

On A TSM!:

posted 4 months ago

Massive Edible Potatoes and a Manly European Poncho? How do you come up with this stuff? Now if you don’t mind I have a tipsy singing martian in my way…

On An Inspiration Of Love Challenge.:

posted 4 months ago

How long will it take you to learn I’m always right? And I’m confused with all the names. There are three guys that like you now. I think. Oh well. Good story.

On "I'm makin' waffles!":

posted 4 months ago

Yay Waffles!!! And from the last one:
I am most certainly not your mother.
Ha! I loved that line!

On MY cliche. Dang it....how do you make the fancy "e"?:

posted 4 months ago

That was an interesting way to do the challenge. Just a question: What was the actual cliche?

On Thief of the King's Luscious Ranch Dressing (Snoopy Challenge):

posted 4 months ago

Omg I think you’ve outdone yourself with this one. A huge stuffed deer honestly!

On The Dream:

posted 4 months ago

The name Dr Paul sort of scares me….

Good series though. Interesting. Can’t wait to see what happens.

On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia:

posted 4 months ago

29 and 30 made me laugh.

On what?!!?!?!?!!!???!?!:

posted 4 months ago

She’s right! ELVES!!!!! This is now my alltime favorite series on ficlets. And it just made my day. Thank you.

On Later, 2 (End of the True or False? series):

posted 4 months ago

How could it end? Nooooo!
And…wait for it…I’m better now.
I have to agree with Flute Loop that was an amazing series and I did love the end.

On Conflicting Voices In My Head!!!!:

posted 4 months ago

I love how he knows the exact day and time of his first drink. After being twisted to my way of thinking it makes it seem like he regrets it. Sequel!

On Coming from left, right and center. [Cliche challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

I like the way you have so many. It took me a while to get it actually hides under bag but I like the new appoach. And I think it’s good you didn’t bold them all. :)

On True friends:

posted 4 months ago

That’s good. I’d like to think my friends would be the same way. I’m glad yours were cool with it and are still your friends.

On Disturbed Youth's Useless Encyclopedia:

posted 4 months ago

I love it! They’er all so funny! I love Entry 24. :)

On The Invitation:

posted 4 months ago

That’s so sad. But it’s so romantic at the same time! I can’t wait to see what happens.

On Sioni Lets Down Her Hair:

posted 4 months ago

I love this! How she’s so confident and then gets nervous when he’s there is very realistic. Can’t wait for more.

On Looks... Y do they matter:

posted 4 months ago

Well, I say F that! If he called you ugly than you can try talking to him but I doubt it’d make much of a difference. He’s a jerk and there are a lot of guys who won’t think like he does!

On Animal Testing:

posted 4 months ago

I agree. Down with animal testing!!!

On Cut to the Chase [Cliche Challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

Ha! I like this:
“Where are we?” Brad inquired, smiling from ear to ear.
“I don’t know,” she replied, grinning at the camera. “What were we doing?”
It’s perfect!

On Southern Fried Cliche:

posted 4 months ago

I like the dialect in it. I could understand it just fine. :)

On The Wisdom of Ten Year Olds [cliché challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

That soudsn like a 10 year old. _{Then I’m never going to like another boy again as long as I live!} Ha! Hilarious!

On Can You Get Any Happier? [Dragon_Sun515 cliche challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

I love it! The accent was great and the story was hilarious!

On Label:

posted 4 months ago

I love this! This is exactly how I feel at school sometimes.

On My mom the photogragher:

posted 4 months ago

I like the plot but in this one and the one before I got a little confused. Good series overall, though.

On Pumpkin...Apple...Custard....:

posted 4 months ago

Of course you can! I’m such a nerd I didn’t think anyone else would want to!

On A Feast:

posted 4 months ago

What does he have to do? Can’t wait for the next one!

ciaos should be chaos.

On Absolution in the Food Court:

posted 4 months ago

Woohoo! GO Megan! I’ll bet those girls he was with got a show.

On At the Meeting:

posted 4 months ago

I’m Catholic and now in church I’ll find myself praying this. I usually think about my ficlets during the homily (wrong, I know) and now I can pray in mass. This has made my day.

On Why Just Why?:

posted 4 months ago

I agree. However, later on you can make them help you solve yours because they have to since you helpedthem and they can’t be selfish….

Did that make sense?

On They called me crazy:

posted 4 months ago

Not sure I get it exactly but it’s good.

On (Phosphate's Challenge) Forever:

posted 4 months ago

Yes, I used the name Edward from Twilight. I couldn’t let her desert someone who has the same name as Bella’s soulmate!

On An Inspiration Of Love:

posted 4 months ago

Dang! I thought I’d be first! Oh well.

On The Sign:

posted 4 months ago

I love it. I think the part with the bird did it for me the most. Helpless but with a little help it goes on because of you. Sort of… Ignore me.

On Maybe You Know:

posted 4 months ago

Oh, I could also imagine it being part of a song. It’d need a refrain and a tune but I could imagine it.
(More stars!)

On Maybe You Know:

posted 4 months ago

This is so sweet! I agree with OTOC it’s definitely got a valentine’s thing going for it.

On Indian Summer:

posted 4 months ago

Sweet. I liked the bickering between sisters.

On six word memoir fun :):

posted 4 months ago

okay, my real entry is this.

Ha! That has to be my favorite!

On The Rival and the Revenge:

posted 4 months ago

This is turning out really well. It’s the perfect pirate story.

On Echo's Random Quiz: Some Answers From...Someone:

posted 4 months ago

I love the Killers! And Barnes and Noble! Woohoo you little hypocrite!

On Our Song:

posted 4 months ago

Oh well. 5 stars!!

On Our Song:

posted 4 months ago

My stars didn’t show up…
how about now?

On Our Song:

posted 4 months ago

That is so sweet! I wish I could be sure to get a guy like Wes. :)

On The Map:

posted 4 months ago

I agree with Kermitgorf. This is definitely interesting and I can’t wait to see what happens.

On The Box:

posted 4 months ago

Who found her? I like the explanations and the bits of background on the girl that you manage to wrap together. I know a bit more about the box now. Good job!

On Echo's Random Quiz: Random questions from a Random Mind Answers:

posted 4 months ago

I love #2!! A lot of people don’t get it when I make comments about the Hitchhikers Guide. I’m giving you 5*s just for that!

On Catching Up:

posted 4 months ago

I like it. How he’s so amazed by her and everything. And the ending. Makes me wonder what’s next.

On Hope starts to break the silence:

posted 4 months ago

I like it. I has an ounce of truth in it because you never really forget your first love or your second love or….

On The 3 Terrible Rulers of I Don't Know:

posted 4 months ago

I like how you build up to it before simply saying that they were women. And how Sebastian was going to harm them but Gavin is chivalrous, at least.

On Acceptance.:

posted 4 months ago

Gasps Why would Aedin tell her? Come on. Tell me.

On The Plum Wood Box:

posted 4 months ago

I’m a little confused but the writing is good. I like it. I agree with madwriter108. You should put a little background info on the box and maybe why she was driving away.

On YULALALALALALAAAA etc. etc.:

posted 4 months ago

YULALALALALALAAAA!

On to the next wonderful ficlet!
Oh, wait, no more. :(

On Confused Guards:

posted 4 months ago

Oh of course!...That damn name gets me every time. ~Hilarious! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

On Pt. 1 of Moonlight Nightmares:

posted 4 months ago

Woah… Now what? Sequel!

On You Got Robbed, Sucka!:

posted 4 months ago

After I finished, just for fun, I smashed the glass door open with the butt of my shotgun. I love that sentence! 5 stars

On The Ignorance of Mankind:

posted 4 months ago

Hmm. Interesting. Makes me wonder what happened. Also interesting how the narrator talks… I don’t know why but I like it.

On The Not So Silent Accident:

posted 4 months ago

That’s so sad. How does she take it?

On Dear Mom and Dad, [six word challenge]:

posted 4 months ago

I love that! It’s a question no one would think of but everyone should, really.

On Soon:

posted 4 months ago

Sounds good. I can’t wait to read it. I was stuck for something myself.

On Wacky Ideas:

posted 4 months ago

Well? What’s she gonna say?

On Daddy's Little Girl :

posted 5 months ago

It’s sweet but not over doing it. That was such a horrible day.

On Lost Souls:

posted 5 months ago

Good. Very sad but I like the writing and actual execution of the idea.

On Disbelief:

posted 5 months ago

Hmm… What happens to MI? Sorry, just worried about my home. lol. Good story. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

On love:

posted 5 months ago

Good writing but you don’t have to wait. Find another guy; trust me there’s better out there who would love to have you. (I’m the only exception)

On Never Let A Boy Hold Your Hand:

posted 5 months ago

throws something heavy at kermitgorf but misses
Dang it! I always did have bad aim.
Good writing and it does a good job of explaing the embarassment I, at least, feel when with a guy I like.

On A Twisted Memoir:

posted 5 months ago

That’s so sad but well written.

On On the Phone:

posted 5 months ago

I love this series. I don’t think I commented on any of them because I wanted to finish the series but brilliant! Kudos to lost_at_sea as well. I can’t wait to read what happens next.

On Book Thieves...:

posted 5 months ago

I know what she said…

On Night Faeries Don't have Wings:

posted 5 months ago

I get what you’re saying One Time but it’s supposed to be traders. You should get it in the next story but I can’t write it now because I’m at a friend’s house. More later though!

On A Boyfriend and then a Slap:

posted 5 months ago

lol. That sounds like something I would’ve done! Except none of the guys I know would’ve asked me to slap them.

On In The End.:

posted 5 months ago

My trumpet! My poor sweet trumpet. :(

And I wish Bryan didn’t like the people he did. >: (

On Early hours:

posted 5 months ago

Stupid 5:30 in the flippin’ morning. I hat mornings.

On Don't Cry Little Boy...:

posted 5 months ago

Are you babysitting?

On Life's not always sunshine and butterflies....:

posted 5 months ago

When you’re a famous song writer don’t forget you’re loving bis sis who wants a new car. ;)

Good work. Now I’m going to have to try and put it to music!

On Doll Maker ( creation):

posted 5 months ago

I’d be freaking out!!!!
Well? Now what?

On Confessions of a Teenage Victim:

posted 5 months ago

I don’t have to deal with with some of the whys but for then ones I’ve had and asked myself all I can say is that I agree with Kermitgorf.

On My Stargirl:

posted 5 months ago

It’s so sad but it sounds so true.

On Don't Read Please!:

posted 5 months ago

Hi!
I’d like to point out that, yes, I am stupid like this.
I was expecting….this actually.

On 10 Reasons Not to Join the Mafia:

posted 5 months ago

I’m very serious when I say thank you for writing this list.
I may have joined the mafia if I didn’t know this!!

On Someday's Quirks (Pens' Challenge):

posted 6 months ago

I used to do that all the time but then I had to force myself to stop. lol!

On {there is no title}:

posted 6 months ago

You should tell him. I hope your situation turns out different then mine did! If you do: Good Luck!!!

On Something Extra [Minimum Length Ficlet Challenge]:

posted 6 months ago

I’m glad I wasn’t eating.
I’m sorry for the repeat but that was hilarious!

On Getting boiled up....:

posted 6 months ago

I worship the other building!
Except it’s not there.
Dang it!

On Lost Todd:

posted 6 months ago

Really? And then? A sequel is definitely called for. Poor Todd.

On My Birthday Present:

posted 6 months ago

This isn’t the motorcycle I want or anything like the one my dad has but, hey, it’s a motorcycle.

On 64 Characters:

posted 6 months ago

Brilliant!
As a writer you have to explore all possibilities.
And be different.

On Oreos and Milk:

posted 6 months ago

1 That sucks. I love milk!!!
#2 This made me laugh!!!

On It's all about variety. :]:

posted 6 months ago

I’m feeling a little out of it. I don’t recognize any of those songs!!

On The game begins.:

posted 6 months ago

You lie!!!
You weren’t the only one to think that!
And you are a little idiot.
No offense meant: I say that in the kindest way.

On Guess who's back:

posted 6 months ago

A sequel is definitely called for here.
Idiots.

On Somebody out there:

posted 6 months ago

I yearn for that, too. Not the word love like my friends all throw around to their boyfriends and girlfriends the day after they get together but the real kind.

On My Process of Writing an Essay (im not that girl's first 50 ficlet challenge):

posted 6 months ago

I should be probably be working on my project due in 5 days. Whoops!

On 5 Things That You Never Knew About Stovohobo (You Know What? 6 Just for the Sake of Non-Conformity) Cont'd:

posted 6 months ago

Like that crack in the sidewalk I poke people. I poke one of my friends because it’s especially funny to watch her jump. In my defense I’m not the only one! We all think it’s funny!