First I would say, your quite lucky cause obviously you don’t need to sleep :D And because 12 hours spending on school is not that bad, in Belgium you have 14 and a half hours. And besides who gets bored when you’r always with two? Great writing by the way
Okay, the ending is funny an unexpected, what is very nice, but in my opinion the beginning doesn’t work that well. all bones and no flesh, a description of what the environment looks like would be nice. Further than that its well written. Greetz
I was constantly thinking what is going to happen? But the ending is hilarious it’s totally different than what you expect! The story is perfectly balanced and every word you write is focused on the ending. That is truly amazing.
Hey, I’m new here but I’ d really like to help you starting a series. One question, on what do we write a sequel or prequel, you haven’t posted anything to work with.
I really like this one. I’m going to write a sequel on it as soon as i have finished my English task (which happens to consist out writing a ficlet) The images you create appeals me. Nicely done.
I’m a 17 year old girl from Belgium and my teacher showed me this website, at first I thought that writing a ficlet was going to be a hell of a boring assignment but since then I’ve changed my opinion and became a ficleteer! they recently pulled the plug on a Dutch website that used to be a safe harbour for my stories so I can’t link you trough to my other creations.
Now, about my ficlets, I’m used to writing books (My first book which I wrote when I was fourteen is published by an internet company see the link) so this is a whole change for me. Not only the length but also the language is a real challenge. I really hope that some of you will like the things I write and help me make some series. Because I’m always writing a new book the chance exists that there are going to periods am absent for a while.
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