Tears of Phoenix's posted comments

  1. On Randomness, GO! (Random Sentence DARE!!!):

    posted about 1 month ago

    Glad you liked it!

  2. On Random Sentence Dare:

    posted about 1 month ago

    I’m 19, and you don’t want to give me sugar either… Anyway, the first sentence could be vastly improved by adding “Again” to the end of it, in my opinion.

  3. On To Play or Be Played:

    posted 4 months ago

    Oh dear. That’s really all I have to say.

  4. On The Room Awaits...:

    posted 4 months ago

    We still don’t know what gives her the coma. It could be that the room starts a chain of events.

  5. On The Wonderball's Message:

    posted 4 months ago

    Sometimes I get chills when I’m reading a story that’s especially good. You’ve given me chills.

    This is amazing and I can’t wait for a sequel. Sadly, I don’t think I’ll do it justice if I do.

  6. On Randomness Parade! (Pure Randomness cont'd):

    posted 4 months ago

    Feel free!

  7. On Randomness Parade! (Pure Randomness cont'd):

    posted 4 months ago

    Changed it, because you were right. This better?

  8. On goodbye:

    posted 4 months ago

    I found it quite good, actually. I really don’t know or need to know what the cause of this was, because it isn’t necessary. Judge the Ficlet itself, not what brought it into being.

    LoA

  9. On READY SET GO NEW CHALLENGE :

    posted 4 months ago

    Well, I tried it. It was super fun!
    LoA

  10. On The Element: Friend or Foe:

    posted 4 months ago

    I like this a lot so far, but I’d probably like it better in novel form. It’s just a tad confusing as is.

  11. On Helpless:

    posted 4 months ago

    Sorry it’s a bit ranty. Once again I had the emo-fits.

    All I’ll say is, if you’re depressed, or sad, or thinking about hurting yourself or others, TELL SOMEONE. Tell everyone you can, until someone will listen. Don’t bottle things up until you can’t fix it.

  12. On And yet, it's not quite over...:

    posted 5 months ago

    Whoa! Possessed hand! How intriguing…

  13. On Shooting Range:

    posted 5 months ago

    A lethal umbrella… I love it! Also, I can really feel the rushed nervousness of the story.

  14. On What In the World is it All About??:

    posted 5 months ago

    To explain, the original ficlet was inspired by a Facebook application called Just Three Words (yes I use Facebook, don’t judge me!). Anyway, the idea is to write a story with multiple people, but each person can write only three words at a time before another person has to continue it. The end result is usually humorous. I thought “Hey, let’s see if we can reproduce it on ficlets!”. I must say, it took off rather well…

  15. On The Most Random Day Ever:

    posted 5 months ago

    Oh my goodness, my first sequel! I feel so special! smiles

  16. On The Randomness Must Go On:

    posted 5 months ago

    YES! The nice bit about randomness is that everyone can do it! Also, on a serious note, it’s good for getting people to describe things.

  17. On Mirror: Reflection of what? [Elsha's Mirror challenge]:

    posted 5 months ago

    As OrangeOreos said, mine just sorta went pop and it came out onto the screen. I think mine is unique, so far. I haven’t had a chance to look through them all yet.

  18. On Une boussole interne:

    posted 6 months ago

    And this, ladies and gentlemen, is a twist! Very very good, and it explains the teddy bear and the enigmatic “Does Emily know about her yet” from several stories ago.

  19. On how to free a man without faking prison break:

    posted 6 months ago

    It’s interesting, but the story isn’t really flowing right for me. Try editing it, perhaps? I’m a bit of a stickler for good grammar, spelling, and punctuation. 3 stars (for now!). I know you can do better, the story is there, just clean it up! =)

  20. On Guilty:

    posted 6 months ago

    I rather like the way this is going. The first thing that popped into my head while reading this was “It’s a he-said she-said” but it has a really interesting twist.

  21. On The Word What Did Him In:

    posted 6 months ago

    I’ve tried something with this. I’d like to see this go two directions (a fork?). I did guilty, now someone make him innocent!

  22. On Now, when Was the Last Time You've Had a Good 'Ol Stovohobo Challenge?:

    posted 7 months ago

    On the other hand, I could get uppity about it, if you really wanted it.

  23. On Now, when Was the Last Time You've Had a Good 'Ol Stovohobo Challenge?:

    posted 7 months ago

    I haven’t gotten uppity about it yet… I kinda assumed you’d answer when you had time.

  24. On Now, when Was the Last Time You've Had a Good 'Ol Stovohobo Challenge?:

    posted 7 months ago

    Aaand, now I’ve combined 1 and 3, tell me what you think!

  25. On Now, when Was the Last Time You've Had a Good 'Ol Stovohobo Challenge?:

    posted 7 months ago

    Stovo has been challenged, but I may have made it a little tricky…

  26. On The Burning Metal:

    posted 7 months ago

    I have to be honest, I’ve read the whole series so far, and I’m not feeling it yet. She has shown up at a dojo, refers to the sensei as, well, a sensei, but has shown no indication of what she intends to learn. In fact, she seems to be far outclassing everyone there, so I’m not really seeing why she’s there in the first place. It just seems a little disjointed to me. I like where it could head, so 4 stars and a watch.

  27. On Finding Emily:

    posted 7 months ago

    I love this series of ficlets! I have no ability to write like this but I’m praying for more!

  28. On Sanctuary:

    posted 7 months ago

    It’s really an amazing piece. It draws you in and keeps you there. I can feel it. The lightly humorous middle gives me the feeling of a last attempt to stop from breaking down entirely, a “final barrier”, if you will.

    I see the scene as a dark greyscale. It happens with me, I get a color from a piece of writing. I’m wondering if this happens with anyone else?

  29. On Six word memoirs CHALLENGE and a word from our subconcious:

    posted 7 months ago

    Thanks! I don’t submit often, sadly. By the way, when I said the second one wasn’t mine, I meant that it wasn’t my memoir. The idea is mine but the actual message has nothing to do with me.

  30. On Still Life:

    posted 8 months ago

    It’s the kind of story where you want a sequel, but you’re afraid of actually getting one because it could utterly ruin the mood. I sense backstory in the boy on the couch.

    I liked it, though!

  31. On Rammula's Mirror [monologues challenge]:

    posted 8 months ago

    P.S. I liked it a lot!

  32. On Rammula's Mirror [monologues challenge]:

    posted 8 months ago

    While scary, I’ve always wondered what the world on the other side of the mirror is like. Maybe it’s remnants of fantastical childhood imaginings, but I liked to think there were people on the other side of the mirror who looked just like us.

  33. On 5 More Awkward Things To Do or Say Right Before The Lights Go Out:

    posted 8 months ago

    Eh, I liked the other ones better. I’m a big fan of crazy though, maybe that’s why.

  34. On Magic's Mark [21]:

    posted 9 months ago

    Hmm, it’s interesting!

  35. On 99Ficlet Challenge Response:

    posted 10 months ago

    Thanks for the input! I never was good at writing anything that could be considered recent history, and historical fiction (I suppose this counts as that, I don’t know) isn’t one of my strong suits. I actually wrote this hoping to get more practice and critique on it.

  36. On 99 Ficlet Challenge: Can you handle this one?:

    posted 10 months ago

    Aieee, I missed it! I didn’t have time to write! Sorry!

  37. On No time to wait, 137th ficlet, I NEED A CHALLENGE NOW!:

    posted 10 months ago

    I think I managed to combine fruit and vampire in a unique way, but I’m not sure, and please correct me if I’m wrong.

  38. On A Bowl of Fruit:

    posted 10 months ago

    It’s… unusual, but in a good way. Too many vampire stories go all dark and gloomy. This one seems (dare I say it) whimsical. A vampire that cares about his prey, even if only to improve the taste. Makes it a little creepier too, though, that the people really don’t know a thing till they get eaten. I would love to see more!

  39. On Blocked from my heart:

    posted 10 months ago

    Thank you, Billy!

  40. On A day in my life (part I) - Autobiography Challenge:

    posted 10 months ago

    sounds like you need coffee in the mornings. anyhoo, seems interesting, kinda amusing too. It’s like a checklist, only the oddest checklist I’ve ever seen.

  41. On I Remember:

    posted 10 months ago

    Ah, thanks! I guess it’s the stereotypical artist thing, never satisfied with the work they do and all that. Which, I suppose, is good. Otherwise we wouldn’t have a motivation to do better.

  42. On I Remember:

    posted 10 months ago

    Okay, I wrote it in a fit of emotion. Not exactly autobiographical, now that I read it again. Sadly, I can’t edit it. I guess it’s more of a “wish-I-could-go-back-again” type of thing, kind of appropriate for a Hallmark card, or a voice-over for one of those cheesy holiday movies on the local station (especially the last line). Oh well.

  43. On Maybe_Miseryx's New Christmas Challenge :

    posted 10 months ago

    I did write something, hope you like it! My first autobiography that I really like.

  44. On The Pintuckle County Cheese Woman:

    posted 10 months ago

    i love it, i just imagine someone reading it in a hillbilly drawl.

  45. On MM [18] *exp.:

    posted 10 months ago

    its a great story, would love to see more. Possibly one where the Magi are being forced to reveal their powers in front of Morti, due to the machinations of an outside source…

  46. On Blocked from my heart:

    posted 10 months ago

    Ah, yes, I love this. It is absolutely perfect. There is nothing I love more than a scathing retort to utter nonsense.

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