-LadyInRed-'s posted comments

  1. On Lips:

    posted about 1 year ago

    come on, i’m dying for the story to continue

  2. On Note in Locker:

    posted about 1 year ago

    creepy girl, Brooke.

  3. On Oh it is love....:

    posted about 1 year ago

    who uses the word “shambles” so much, or to think of it, AT ALL!!! nice plot though.

  4. On Swami:

    posted about 1 year ago

    yeah, starts out really descriptive, sort of sprints to the end, but it’s just something i did. i was bored people.

  5. On Oh NO!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    u r so cool. how do u come up with this stuff?

  6. On Will It Really Work?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    awesome. as always.

  7. On Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen):

    posted about 1 year ago

    I know it’s a bit abrupt, but I tried. Rate it how you will! (But please, try to write a sequel) & LEAVE COMMENTS & RATINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!

  8. On Not As I Planned:

    posted about 1 year ago

    awesome.

  9. On Unwanted Subjects, The Queen Strikes Back:

    posted about 1 year ago

    please dont bother doing that.

  10. On The Crazy Psychiatrist:

    posted about 1 year ago

    great story, but i think that you spelled psychiatrist wrong.

  11. On Chicken Queen's Sanity:

    posted about 1 year ago

    well, i like old words. they make things sound more how i want them to.

  12. On My Plan's On It's Way:

    posted about 1 year ago

    go revenge!

  13. On LOL:

    posted about 1 year ago

    idk that

  14. On Rise of the Chicken Queen:

    posted about 1 year ago

    awesome

  15. On Meet You At The Swingset:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I love this. It makes me feel bad about the incident where a swing nearly took out my eye. I was 5.

  16. On Popular 10:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I wish I had a Melody. I know that I need one. Oh, yeah, if my Melody stabs me in the back, I’d stab her right back!!!! AWESOME!!!! I really like the way that it portrays how society passes over some people. Really cool

  17. On Unwanted Subjects, The Queen Strikes Back:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I know that the machine gun might be considered strange, but you might remember “The Call for Help from Chickens” where Becky calls her mother’s psychiatrist.

  18. On The Edge Of The World:

    posted about 1 year ago

    this is awesome. deep.

  19. On Van Mantra's Betrayal:

    posted about 1 year ago

    thnx for the comments, but i have one question. Mr.Peck, why are you imitating Tony the Tiger (GRReat!) from the cereal, you know Frosted Flakes? (No offense, just a harmless joke)

  20. On Van Mantra's Rise:

    posted about 1 year ago

    yeah, I’m from India, I thought that was weird too. Yeah, and I love this sequel. I need to get more practice, sigh.

  21. On Sea Serpent Splash:

    posted about 1 year ago

    That’s an amazing story, and for me it’s really hard to write something action-ey because it ends up really bland and just like boring. But still, I agree with “Crown Me Tarzan, King of Mars”. You said seamen. Giggle.

  22. On You Can't Beat Pirate Pete:

    posted about 1 year ago

    You know, I bet people have tried to write (successful) sequels to this, failed and considered them the ripoffs of the original. Again, I luv it.

  23. On Whar be Pirate Pete?!:

    posted about 1 year ago

    SO COOL!!!!!!! And the accented talk is amazing. Artistic way of describing their disgusting ways. I luv it.

  24. On Mantra, or Mezin?:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Your ending is much more creative, not to mention much more realistically written. Well, practice makes perfect.

  25. On Betty the Chicken Forgotten:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Everyone I’m sorry about the Brad and Betty confusion, first I chose Brad, and then I changed it, but forgot to change one part, so sorry if it was confusing, I’ve fixed it now.

  26. On Van Mantra's Betrayal:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yeah, I know the ending is a bit, well, uncreative, but other than that, what do you think?

  27. On New School, First Day Fears:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Yeah, thanks for the advice. I ditched the idea of it becoming a series, because frankly, i too am tired of the same old cliche stories of girls going to new schools. I think I will try fiction now.

  28. On LOL:

    posted about 1 year ago

    i do not need help, this is a sequel to someone else’s idea, not mine.

  29. On The Positively Prophetic Adventures of Pie:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I know that was lame, but it is a true story.

  30. On The Positively Prophetic Adventures of Pie:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I know the value of pie. In Junior High, we got the left over pies from the 8th graders Pie Day. (They also have Decades Day where everyone dresses up as hippies). It was a matter of life or death. If I didn’t act fast, I would have been stuck with an overly done apple pie (which I am incredibly bored of). The choice was mine, I beat my rival to the delicious berry filled pie. The taste makes me want to leave my diet for someone else to finish. All is fair in love, war, and pie.

  31. On Alex 2:1-9:

    posted about 1 year ago

    Well, actually, I’m Hindu, so I was completely clueless as to the name of the sequel, hence the “Part II” thing.

  32. On Our Sister Venus:

    posted about 1 year ago

    that’s really cool how it’s a beautiful piece of writing that also has a purpose and a deep meaning.

  33. On In Mantra We Trust:

    posted about 1 year ago

    This is amazing. That is all I have to say.

  34. On Alex 2:1-9:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I didn’t know, sorry I’m not Christian, so I’ll change the title.

  35. On John Cage: A Biography in 4' 33":

    posted about 1 year ago

    LOL, I don’t get it, but I’ll pretend that I do. Hahahaha! That is so funny!

  36. On Alex 1:1-13:

    posted about 1 year ago

    I luv it, it’s just so funny, you don’t really need a transition, the sudden change makes it better, sort of like a surprise.

  37. On Breakdown of a Psychiatrist:

    posted about 1 year ago

    That is really cool, and it is probably how most psychiatrists feel. I mean seriously, twenty years ago people would only go to a psychiatrist if they had TOTALLY lost their mind, nowadays a psychiatrists is hired for even the most trivial things. They must get bored. Maybe they doodle on the little clipboard they bring along. (No offense intended towards any actual psychologists or psychiatrists, if you feel insulted, I offer my apologies)

  38. On Second Thoughts:

    posted about 1 year ago

    It’s amazing how many amazing authors haven’t gotten discovered yet, isn’t it?

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