Comments Made by Kinetic Kenzie™

Comment on Dogbane

2008-03-26T18:28:19Z

*piece

Comment on Dogbane

2008-03-26T18:27:09Z

this is a beautiful peice of writing. I lovet he point of view you are coming from witth story and i cannot wait to read more.

Comment on Would Anyone Miss Me?

2008-03-24T02:11:48Z

i love this story. when i was in first grade someone hit one of my classmates at a zoo. the driver was drunk. i really like this ficlet. thankyou for writing it :)

Comment on Macy 1: Angel (Story Challenge)

2008-03-24T01:20:13Z

this is a very cute story. i think there is a great sequel coming up, or at least its set up for one. but nevertheless, amazing ficlet, i cant wait to read more.

Comment on Escape

2008-03-24T01:11:50Z

wow, i love this piece, writing really does sometimes take you places, even if the stories are completely fictional and have nothing to with you, or if they’ve everything to do with you. this is a really motivating piece, thank you for writing it.

Comment on What was Right, Now Seems So Wrong

2008-03-24T00:51:36Z

wow. this is a really meaningful peace of poetry, and from what I can tell you really meant what you said, and thats what makes a good writer, from my experience. so keep writing, and I’ll keep reading because people could learn a lot from your amazing ficlets.

Comment on Rainy Night

2008-03-24T00:40:59Z

rain seems to calm us all.
when there’s a downpour for one fleeting moment everyone seems to stop and stare.
and sleep calmly.
‘to hear the rain fall into the buckets’
i think, the most peaceful sound on this earth…

Comment on The Easter Parade Horror

2008-03-24T00:19:46Z

I really love how this story builds up the tension about ‘the terrifying beast’ and then you find out its just the easter bunny.