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  <title>Comments on 'Beauty and ugliness'</title>
  <subtitle>They say the stars are like jewels of the sky and the moon being its diamond pendant. My parents used to tell me this when I was a child and we came to the beach often at night. But now I come alone...

I stand here near the ocean shores, legs concealed by the veil of knee-deep dark water, calm waves gently crashing against my frail form as if to greet a newcomer. The breeze of cool air brushes caringly against my skin as if to wipe away the streaming tears of pain. Blowing the tangle of dark hair into my face and I push them aside for nature to see my scars. Yes, scars. I have scars from a fire incident.

There is nothing to console me but the comfort of silence and whisper of the gentle wind. I glance at my hideous reflection in the water, but the ripple of my teardroplets and waves do not let me see. 

I feel weightless, as if a great burden had just been taken of me. Once again my eyes glance back up at the moon and gazing at its wonderful radiance, it makes me feel beautiful...</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-09-23T17:45:21Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Beauty and ugliness</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;i can just imagine that scene. I love your word choice&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-23T17:45:21Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>emma jo_234</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Beauty and ugliness</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That&amp;#8217;s deep. It&amp;#8217;s really good.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/10019?basename=13793</id>
    <published>2007-09-23T16:43:22Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>User 5239</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Beauty and ugliness</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Beautifully written.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/10019?basename=13790</id>
    <published>2007-09-23T16:32:09Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Batak Beatrix</name>
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