Laurielle nearly cried with relief. _Glayelle, I need you._ _Maybe you should have realized that before you stole Adrastos...remember him?_ replied the tart voice. Laurielle laughed bitterly. _I never stole him, we were never anything but friends._ _I don't believe you._ _All right then,_ thought Laurielle, _as proof that I'm not involved with any mermen, come help me save my man._ _Man as in...human?_ asked Glayelle, sounding both shocked and curious. _Yes! Yes!_ cried Laurielle with relief. Quickly, she flashed pictures of the recent events through her head, leaving Glayelle only the smallest of seconds to see the Kraken. _The Kraken's back?!_ said Glayelle with tangible fear in her thoughts. _Yes...long story, but I need you to come help save my boyfriend, Matt, and transform me back to a human state. Please help!_, she begged. &quot;All right, all right, enough with the dramatic retelling,&quot; said a voice from up on the dock, &quot;By the way, very nice looking manfriend, or whatever they're called.&quot; 2007-10-13T01:48:42Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/10111 <p>lol that last pary was like hilarious love i dont find a thing wrong with it ! : ]</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=17307 2007-10-13T01:48:42Z NikkiC93 http://ficlets.com/authors/cool <p> LOL . Manfriend. That&#8217;s funny. I like it.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=14721 2007-09-28T00:33:56Z Lone Writer http://ficlets.com/authors/solopen <p>well thank you! lol</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=14085 2007-09-24T20:58:53Z blueyedwonder http://ficlets.com/authors/blueyedwonder <p>Works better. I&#8217;ll give another star for your trouble.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=14084 2007-09-24T20:56:19Z Alexa ♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018 <p>All right, sorry to all those who liked the spiel, as I cut it out, but I was getting critiqued about that, so I edited it.</p> <p>Kermit&#8212;It was supposed to convey reading one another&#8217;s conscious thoughts. Did it work, or should I do some more editing?</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=14072 2007-09-24T20:25:48Z blueyedwonder http://ficlets.com/authors/blueyedwonder <p>I really liked it, but I thought that the schpeal was too long, and that the readers don&#8217;t need a re-hashing of events we just read about.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=14039 2007-09-24T18:57:41Z Alexa ♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018 <p>mermaidmerman stories are fun to read and write, you did a good job, do mermaids/men speak in italics? j/k</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=13973 2007-09-24T04:25:38Z SKermitgorf http://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorf <p>I appreciated the naming of the Kraken, and the dynamic is good, but I think I got a bit lost in the schpeal, just a tad too long&#8230;or I have a very short attention span.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=13960 2007-09-24T02:23:06Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 <p>Ahhhh, the Kraken&#8230;.very nice &#8220;manfriend/boyfriend&#8221; shpeal. I liked it, and all of these.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10111?basename=13946 2007-09-24T01:15:29Z Stovohobo http://ficlets.com/authors/stovohobo