Comments on 'Bob's Gift'She sat in the car and fumed while he loaded the backseat. Then he went and rapped on her window. She cracked it and glared at him. "What?"
Bob smiled shyly. "Get outta the car. I got somethin' for you."
"Give it to me in here."
"Naw, it'll be better out here."
Her nose wrinkled as she tried to choose between inconvenienced and curious. But he knew she'd get out of the car. He knew how to pick them.
"What is it?" she said, standing in the snow.
"I gotcha somethin' special, to show how I feel for ya'. It's why I was runnin' late. Bought it th' other day but couldn't pick it up 'til today."
She was flushed, not just from the cold. "Show me!"
"'Kay," he said, "here it is."
He pulled the taser out of his coat. It made an insectile clacking noise, and Tessa squealed as he prodded her face and arms with it until she lay curled, sobbing, in the snow. Then he rolled her into the icy ditch by the side of the road with his foot.
Best eighty bucks he'd ever spent, he thought, driving off.2007-09-25T19:48:13Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/10147Comment on Bob's Gift<p>Very nice twist, told you he had all the answers.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10147?basename=142452007-09-25T19:48:13ZThe_Counthttp://ficlets.com/authors/the_count_318Comment on Bob's Gift<p>bob is definatley one the best ficlet characters ive read. great job</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10147?basename=140712007-09-24T20:18:27ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Bob's Gift<p>Then he wraps her in a carpet, and the whole thing comes full circle . . . just kidding.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10147?basename=140542007-09-24T19:35:13ZAlexa ♥http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018Comment on Bob's Gift<p>Lol, this is a great totally separate story now. Very fun. Very devilish character.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10147?basename=140342007-09-24T18:50:54ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Bob's Gift<p>You are an evil, evil man. You know that, right?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10147?basename=140262007-09-24T18:24:14ZCrown Me Tarzan, King of Marshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_605Comment on Bob's Gift<p>I was writing a prequel to Alexa’s chapter and just as I was getting ready to publish it, I notice your addition. I’m going to go back and revise, now :-)<br />Very cool twist, by the way.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10147?basename=140252007-09-24T18:12:50ZCrown Me Tarzan, King of Marshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_605Comment on Bob's Gift<p>Certainly raises the tension a bit.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10147?basename=140202007-09-24T17:21:10ZAlexa ♥http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018