Comments on 'Arrival At The Dark Castle'Reinhardt was almost disappointed by the absence of torches and farm implements. The only people at the door were a motley group of five. They appeared to be in their twenties, and bore knapsacks, thick tomes, what appeared to be a sample case, and shopping bags that appeared to be full of beer, Mountain Dew, and Doritos.
"Hey!" the girl in front said. She was cute, but not pretty, wearing a faded t-shirt that claimed Reinhardt's mother had been "pwn3d." Reinhardt tried to decipher this code. Had his mother been taken to a shady businessman and used as collateral in a short-term loan without his knowing? He should call the rest home tomorrow morning. Then he suddenly noticed that the young lady was _sans_ brassiere and probably thought he was staring at her breasts (which _were_ nice, now that he _was_ staring at them), and Reinhardt flushed and jerked his eyes up to the woman's (her eyes _were_ pretty, and this made it all worse).
She seemed oblivious, though. "So," she said, "are you Lore's roommate?"2007-09-26T20:39:29Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/10289Comment on Arrival At The Dark Castle<p>I love the analytical consideration of ‘pwn3d’. This crowd would seem fascinating to an anthropologist, I’m sure.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10289?basename=144502007-09-26T20:39:29ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Arrival At The Dark Castle<p>The entire second paragraph was just amazing.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/10289?basename=144242007-09-26T18:02:58ZAlexa ♥http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018