Comments on 'Gwen'

Comments on 'Gwen' "Nice place," she added. "I don't normally LARP, but you could totally do a cool session up here." "Much better than doing it in a graveyard," she added, making a face. Reinhardt was caught somewhere between utter bafflement and frank adoration. Being a man of Science, he decided to go with the former. "Who th-the b-b-bloody Hell are you?" He needed to calm down - he was starting to sound like _Lorencz_. "I'm Gwen," she said, stepping uninvited through the door. She was shorter than Reinhardt liked, and hippier, and he preferred the long tresses and obsolete fashion-sense of his beloved Anna (killed by first creature) and adored Elizabeth (died fleeing second creature) or doomed Celeste (fell off bicycle and plummeted into bottomless crevasse - oh, how satisfying to be the one suing those damn villagers for a change!). But she had spunk and eyes of jade, the full bosom of a fair sweet maid, upon which (he dreamt) his head was laid- Reinhardt stopped trying to make a poem. It wasn't his calling. 2007-09-26T20:41:02Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/10290 Comment on Gwen <p>The random third death was a nice touch, and the rhyming was good. Funny how men are ever hopeful, even when odds are not in their favor.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10290?basename=14451 2007-09-26T20:41:02Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 Comment on Gwen <p><strong>Best line:</strong> “Reinhardt stopped trying to make a poem. It wasn’t his calling.” <br />~<br />I also loved the part about his wives’ deaths.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10290?basename=14425 2007-09-26T18:04:45Z Alexa ♥ http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018