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  <title>Comments on 'Waves of Dreaming'</title>
  <subtitle>Wake me up from waves of dreaming
Where I&#8217;m stuck inside your mind
Drifting off in clouds of consciousness
Afraid that I&#8217;ll be left behind

It turns out that I just can&#8217;t sleep
When I&#8217;m alive inside your dreams
Skipping after new disasters
Where thought flows in gentle streams

Sometimes I feel like I am drowning
Underneath your dream-spell&#8217;s weight
All night long I fight for breath
And it&#8217;s keeping me awake</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-09-30T03:05:55Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Waves of Dreaming</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;How odd.  Third poem I&amp;#8217;ve read tonight.  The first was about a dream.  The second was about a cloud.  And now this, a dream with clouds and storms and stuff.  Your poem was the best of the three, by the way.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-30T03:05:55Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Waves of Dreaming</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;niceeee!! as always, great talent and emotion displayed. :)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-30T00:09:53Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>blueyedwonder</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Waves of Dreaming</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;awesome poem, I wish I could write  peotry like that. such depth.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-29T23:04:31Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>SKermitgorf</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Waves of Dreaming</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Ooohh.  I like this.  It starts so nice and and lovely, but then there&amp;#8217;s a twist at the end.  It&amp;#8217;s very well written.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-09-29T22:47:40Z</published>
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