Comments on 'The Marked 25'

Comments on 'The Marked 25' "Michelle..calm down your dreaming." David said holding her shoulders. She looked at him then around the room,stone white walls accompanied by two chairs and a tv that sat high against the wall facing her. "Im...in a hospital?" Michelle asked puzzled. "David brought you here when you fainted..don't you remember?" a soft voice announced. "Mom?" Michelled said looking to her left. "How are you honey? Are you ok?" The woman said smiling. "I'm ok mom,really, I think I'm just a little tired." Michelle replyed pulling her hair from her eyes. "That woman works you kids to death I know it,whats her name Shin-boot.?" "She doesn't care what happens to you as long as her fish flakes are done!" "Mom..don't worry so much" Michelle sighed "Yea, that old crow isn't so bad once you get to know her." David laughed. "I see your awake, welcome back" The Doctor smiled walking in. "Doctor is she going to be ok?" The woman asked. 2007-10-02T22:53:20Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/10647 Comment on The Marked 25 <p>yeah tell her she was bit by a vampire Dr.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10647?basename=15675 2007-10-02T22:53:20Z Kiarra http://ficlets.com/authors/born2write