Comments on 'The Marked 26'

Comments on 'The Marked 26' "Yes, but she is a little weak and it would appear shes anemic , I want to keep her here over night." The Doctor added "Oh god," The woman sighed clasping her hands together. "Thanks again Doc, keep me posted." David said standing up. "Oh, are you leaving David?" The woman asked. "Yes Ma'am, Ms.Shin-boot calls." he said with a smirk walking toward the door. "Hey, I'll catch up with you later ok?" Michelle said waving to him. With a smile and nod David exited the room,still in the room the doctor read silently from his clipboard then turned his attention back toward them. "Alright Michelle, you stay put, I'll get you some food and I'll see you tomorrow." "Okay," Michelle smiled "Thankyou Doctor." The woman said touching his sleeve. Later that night after her mother went home a shape appeared outside of her door. "Michelle..." a voice said Awaken by the sound Michelle slowly sat up in her bed looking around. "I must be dreaming"she sighed touching her head. 2007-10-02T22:55:12Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/10650 Comment on The Marked 26 <p>nope, not dreaming, great story…more, more, more.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/10650?basename=15676 2007-10-02T22:55:12Z Kiarra http://ficlets.com/authors/born2write