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  <title>Comments on ' That Smile (Lone Writers Challange)'</title>
  <subtitle>Jerry take off those stupid pants, I'll be in the foodcourt Ash said; walking quickly out of the store.
Well that had to have been a _catastrophic_ blow to her enormous ego, a smile streached across her face. 
Jerry caught up to her; what's that about, he pointed at her face? 
What she asked? 
That smile. 
Nothing, she wiped it away.
Jerry took the tray to a back corner booth and they sat down.
Do you think I devastated her, he ask playfully? 
Kidd'n, totally; did you see the look on her face, if she ever had a _romantic_ thought about you; well that's gone. 
A few minutes later.
Ash about the dance _he looked down_, about the dance I was just, well will you go with me?
Ash stopped eating, this was a surprise she couldn't suppress her smile this time.
Yes, _she thought he'd never ask._
Cool he said, now less go check out the new store.
New store? Yeah it's called _Juxtaposition_ .</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-03-08T03:54:16Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on  That Smile (Lone Writers Challange)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;hays i lovee this!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-03-08T03:54:16Z</published>
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      <name>LovingYourHeartbreak&#9829;</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on  That Smile (Lone Writers Challange)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Hoorah!! I&amp;#8217;m am impressed! You did a great job with this one.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-10-27T21:23:48Z</published>
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