Comments on 'Broken Heart'Lauri sprawled dolefully across her bed, sobbing quietly. Glayelle had silently driven her home with much bewitchment of the car, the whole time with a cynical, irate face, pursed lips and focused spell-beam eyes.
"All right," said Glayelle assertively from the doorway, her hands on her hips. "Pack your charm, your mermyd armor, anything else you would want for a quest."
Lauri looked up slowly, her swollen eyes uncomprehending. "Why?" she asked in a depressed monotone.
"Why do you think?" asked Glayelle, straightening her pillows and pushing in her desk chair. "We're going after Matt, or Mohrak, or whatever you want to call him."
"Why?" repeated Lauri in the same bored, dispirited tone.
"Because you love each other," said Glayelle tartly. "Just because he's being an idiot right now doesn't mean you don't _love_ each other...Poseidon, if we stopped loving every time men were stupid, we'd all be single all our lives. Now _get up_!"
Stiffly, Lauri rose. "Fine. But don't blame me when it turns sour."2007-11-17T02:03:02Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/11348Comment on Broken Heart<p>Hm. If I could write a good story in a specific order I would take example from you. However….if you haven’t noticed, my little merlin trilogy was like…not in order. But, I just wanted you to know that I adore your series! It’s amazing! Anyway, I want to see you on that most active list.<br />curbxstomp</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11348?basename=235942007-11-17T02:03:02Zcurbxstomphttp://ficlets.com/authors/curbxstompComment on Broken Heart<p>I really liked that Glayelle was so supportive of her friend, and of course, THX ’s comment.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11348?basename=176662007-10-15T18:22:51ZAlexa ♥http://ficlets.com/authors/alexa1018Comment on Broken Heart<p>lol</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11348?basename=173962007-10-13T16:56:35ZNikkiC93http://ficlets.com/authors/coolComment on Broken Heart<p>Personally, I appreciated the line about, ‘if we stopped loving every time men were stupid…’, cause frankly, we’re pretty stupid as a gender.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11348?basename=173712007-10-13T13:51:35ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Broken Heart<p>wow this was rlly good. i like turning them into speices that hate each other. ill b watching for a sequel.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11348?basename=173272007-10-13T02:16:35Z.:band baby:.http://ficlets.com/authors/bandbabyComment on Broken Heart<p>write another one pls i read all of theese seires it is so awsome !!!!!!!!! make more pls !</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11348?basename=173152007-10-13T02:02:13ZNikkiC93http://ficlets.com/authors/cool