Comments on 'A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight'Girl and Guy stood somewhere in Montana, surrounded by trees and snow and trees...and snow...and...um...and trees, and snow....and....Oh whatever it was just trees and snow, ok? Just trees, and snow. That's all. Nothing else. Nothing. Nada. Kaput. Comprende?!!??!?
Girl suddenly started. "Did you hear that?" she asked Guy, who shrugged and continued trying to put on his shirt, which for some reason didn't want to go on. "I heard something! Someone crying, or something.." A noise came through the trees. "Heeelp.....meeeee...."
Girl and Guy ran through the trees towards the noise. And what did they find there, lo and behold?
*pause for dramatic tension*
Hannah Montana, the "teen pop sensation", lying pregnant in the snow!2008-01-13T23:29:45Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/11461Comment on A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight<p>Hahaha. Again, liked the first paragraph.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11461?basename=343542008-01-13T23:29:45Zemma jo_234http://ficlets.com/authors/emmajComment on A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight<p>haha, trees and snow</p>
<p>you’ve done montana literary justice : D</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11461?basename=342832008-01-13T18:34:43ZNouvelle Bardothttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_bardotComment on A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight<p>My favorite line :<br /><em>Girl suddenly started. “Did you hear that?” she asked Guy, who shrugged and continued trying to put on his shirt, which for some reason didn’t want to go on.</em><br /> HAHAHA !More I demand!More! lol</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11461?basename=214002007-11-05T00:21:17ZSailor Emohttp://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_loveComment on A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight<p>haha this is so random and funny and weird!! i love it!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11461?basename=175962007-10-15T01:39:16ZGreen Applehttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_4470Comment on A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight<p>Not really…you’ll see!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11461?basename=175512007-10-14T22:43:35ZInsert Pen Name Here http://ficlets.com/authors/yaylaneComment on A Ridiculously Unplausible Love Story, or Why Does His Shirt Keep Coming Off? Part Eight<p>Did she try to elope too??</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11461?basename=175492007-10-14T22:16:51ZMistress Elsha Hawkhttp://ficlets.com/authors/mistress_elsha_hawk