Comments on 'The Marked 51'

Comments on 'The Marked 51' "Test..we gotta Test!" Michelle screamed as she turned running toward the door. "Omg..." Michelle gasped stopping looking outside into the hallway. A tall figure loomed in the hallway holding Test in front of him, he held her shoulders tight pushing her into the room. "Look what I found.." Kane sneered "Test..." Michelle cried "I'm sorry.." Test sobbed "Well, looks like we're all together," Vincent smirked "Vincent what the hell is going on here!" Test asked "Hey sweetheart, you look very pretty." Vincent smiled rubbing his hands together. "Vincent, tell me your not friends with this psycho!" Test screamed "I'll show you a psycho bitch!" Kane growled squeezing her shoulders. "Ahhhhaahhh!" Test screaming arching her back "Stop it your killing her!" Michelle screamed "Kane that's enough!, let her go." "You need to control your anger, after all the hard work I did getting everything ready and your about to ruin it because of your damn temper!" Vincent yelled 2007-10-16T02:10:03Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/11499 Comment on The Marked 51 <p>wow, what are they gonna do?</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/11499?basename=17876 2007-10-16T02:10:03Z Kiarra http://ficlets.com/authors/born2write