Comments on 'my escape (poem)'In the rain
alone
was beautiful
now is not
in two seconds anger came
then will leave in knots
Seems so perfect
standing on the outside
but inside
all alone
almost like a blackhole
I try to escape
never works
i plan them so well
they just end up as dirt
when i grow & mature
i will learn more & more
maybe then my escape will be
but they will learn more with mehttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/11652