Do you see the mountains shifting, or the grass turn a new hue? Did you catch the midnight rainstorm, or gaze upon the long-gone dew? Will the sky fall down around us, or our loved ones live again? Should I wait for you forever, or would that be called a sin? 2007-11-16T23:16:40Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/11658 <p>This is written in so few words, yet i don&#8217;t think that any more could possibly be said otherwise the piece would fall apart. Your writing is fluid and sounds very good read aloud. Then again, most poetry is, as poetry is meant to be heard and felt and not so much seen and read.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/11658?basename=23578 2007-11-16T23:16:40Z Sophia D'Soleil http://ficlets.com/authors/crimson_light <p>Very beautifully written, Girlie</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/11658?basename=23216 2007-11-15T02:44:42Z Brebelles http://ficlets.com/authors/brebelles <p>loved it!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/11658?basename=18979 2007-10-21T06:46:06Z Yeah Write! http://ficlets.com/authors/yeahwrite <p>I thank ye kindly :)</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/11658?basename=18205 2007-10-17T22:06:10Z Blossom Ruoqen http://ficlets.com/authors/stainedglasstears <p>This is really pretty.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/11658?basename=18186 2007-10-17T21:20:37Z someday_93 http://ficlets.com/authors/someday_93