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  <title>Comments on 'Once Beloved'</title>
  <subtitle>My once beloved queen is at the window, her pale heart-shaped face reflected in the glass. Her posture is perfect, as always, her diminutive figure austere. Poised. From this distance I cannot see her eyes, but I envision the pain swimming in the black pools of her irises. She gives no outward sign of the poison that is at this very moment eating away at her. I wonder if she knows that she is dying. 

&amp;quot;Night blooming mushroom,&amp;quot; the imperial doctor told me as he drew the black bulb out of his bag and placed it in my hand. &amp;quot;Very poisonous.&amp;quot; It crouched on my open palm like a deadly spider, ready to pounce and deliver its venom. &amp;quot;The intended victim should drink tea distilled with its essence every six hours, and within 72 hours he will suffer irreparable heart damage and fall into a coma.&amp;quot;

&amp;quot;Can she -- I mean, he awaken from the coma?&amp;quot;

&amp;quot;No, the effect is terminal. Once the poison reaches the heart, he will surely die.&amp;quot;

&amp;quot;Good.&amp;quot;

A fitting end for a traitorous wife. For one who gave her heart away so freely. </subtitle>
  <updated>2007-10-20T15:39:35Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Once Beloved</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;I like the change in point of view&amp;#8230;this is amazing. But like Kiarra said&amp;#8230;how can people do things like that?&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-10-20T15:39:35Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>someday_93</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Once Beloved</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;dang&amp;#8230;I dont see how people can do things like that&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-10-18T23:37:57Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Kiarra</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Once Beloved</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Ha! Thanks. ;)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-10-18T23:18:45Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ana Cristina</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Once Beloved</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;And people wonder why I don&amp;#8217;t want to get married.  Again, I like your descriptions and turn of phrase.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-10-18T23:17:41Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Batak Beatrix</name>
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