Comments on 'Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]'I come home from school to see a big truck in my driveway. _That's strange._ I think and head over to find my dad - he had some explaining to do.
"Daddy, what's going on?"
"Oh it's nothing hunny, they're just taking all of the furniture out of our house."
"What! Why?"
"It's fine, hun."
I stop and stare at the man taking my sofa. He didn't look very nice - he wasn't clean, his outfit was horrible, his facial fuzz was just creepy, and his stare could frighten a ghost.
"That doesn't answer my question, Daddy!" I yell and begin to cry. "Why are they doing this to us?!"
"It's fine, hun."
Frustrated with my father, I head into my house to see how much they were going to take - turns out, the only thing they left were the walls, the wallpaper, the stairs, and the floor. Everything else, including the doors, was gone.
Just then I see one of the men dragging my Dad away, gun in hand.
"No!! Daddy!"
"It's fine, hun."
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I wake up breathing hard, scared more than a 6yr old should be.2007-10-29T18:46:43Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/11971Comment on Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]<p>I read it and really liked it, and then I read the comments; only then did my heart start beating faster. It took a little time for the suspense to catch up with me, which is what happens in real life, yet is difficult to portray in written work.<br />Good Job!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11971?basename=202142007-10-29T18:46:43ZBlossom Ruoqenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/stainedglasstearsComment on Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]<p>remembering what was said in a dream, thats amazing. well written, suspenseful, no wonder you were scared, your secuirtiy was in jeopardy, all your things taken away—symbolisim there.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11971?basename=193112007-10-23T04:13:15ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]<p>wow. this is really the only word i can think of. nice job.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11971?basename=192982007-10-23T00:39:05ZMaybe_Miseryxhttp://ficlets.com/authors/cheeruppleaseex_comComment on Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]<p>scAry…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11971?basename=192912007-10-23T00:05:50ZBetwINeenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/betwineenComment on Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]<p>So, at six you already understood the perils of getting into debt with a ruthless loan shark. Good for you! Seriously, though, that is a scary dream.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11971?basename=191242007-10-22T01:59:40ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]<p>awww.. thats sad. I would be scared too.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11971?basename=191082007-10-22T01:22:02ZInsert Pen Name Here http://ficlets.com/authors/yaylaneComment on Scared More Than A 6 Year Old Should Be [Dream Challenge.]<p>this was my most memrable nightmares – yes, i actually had this dream when i was 6. what caused me to have this dream is beyond me, but it happened, and i was.. scared. reallly scared. =[</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/11971?basename=191052007-10-22T01:17:12ZOne Time, One Chancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/one_chance