Comments on 'He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants'The air was thick around him. Sweaty bodies pulsated around the crowded dance floor.
So cliche, he thought.
_They both go to all of the same clubs where everyone takes all the same drugs and talks about how they're so fucked up._
A skinny girl in too-tight jeans stumbled over to him and stuck her tongue down his throat. He humoured her for a while until she realised he was someone else. Horrified, he left her to gyrate to the music and sought shelter in the lounge area of the club. _It was a sight to be seen._
He didn't want to be here anymore. He used to do this all the time; club-hopping hoping to find some desperate girl to take home but he was sick of it. He wasn't like this. He wanted to be a struggling artist who did anything for their creative lifestyle. He wanted to live for something, not just cigarettes and bad beer.
_It's time for his yearly change of style._ He grabbed his jacket; _I wonder who they'll be next week_ he thought on his way out.
He was done with this. He was going to find her.2007-10-31T20:35:19Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/12191Comment on He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants<p>This is great! I love how you use song lyrics for these.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/12191?basename=205182007-10-31T20:35:19Zsomeday_93http://ficlets.com/authors/someday_93Comment on He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants<p>It was pretty much guaranteed that I was going to love this as soon as I saw the title…also, it’s written very well. It gets the bleakness of this guy’s life across very well without ever stating it openly – great example of “show, don’t tell”.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/12191?basename=201402007-10-28T23:24:41ZMycrofthttp://ficlets.com/authors/zsigeComment on He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants<p>He wanted to be a struggling artist who did anything for their creative lifestyle. He wanted to live for something, not just cigarettes and bad beer.<br />_<br />hehe, interestingly stated. i dont know about everybody else, but struggling writers have a habit of picking up drug addictions or suffering complete mental or emotional breakdowns. Cigs and bad beer tend to be a mainstay in the lives of us never-will-be’s. This guy’s got a rough path ahead of him. Good little ficlet, again.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/12191?basename=199322007-10-27T08:00:18ZFourSevenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/foursevenComment on He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants<p>oh im SOO glad that middle paragraph worked out….I edited it upwards of 4 times to make it just right and im glad it paid off! :)<br />thank you everyone</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/12191?basename=199102007-10-27T01:22:13Zartistsrunwildhttp://ficlets.com/authors/artistsrunwildComment on He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants<p>Love the ending!!!!!!!! ♥♥</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/12191?basename=198582007-10-26T20:01:37ZJonasBrothersLova148http://ficlets.com/authors/jonasbrotherslova148Comment on He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants<p>I agree, that one paragraph makes the story.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/12191?basename=198282007-10-26T17:16:51ZSaint Chuckhttp://ficlets.com/authors/chuck_theloveComment on He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants<p>sounds like a sight to be seen…<br />A skinny girl in too-tight jeans stumbled over to him and stuck her tongue down his throat. He humoured her for a while until she realised he was someone else. Horrified, he left her to gyrate to the music and sought shelter in the lounge area of the club. It was a sight to be seen. that whole paragraph is awesome!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/12191?basename=198162007-10-26T16:06:04ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on He's Sick Of Spray-On Pants<p>“Spray-On Pants” – Kisschasy [A highly recommended Aussie Band]</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/12191?basename=198012007-10-26T11:40:17Zartistsrunwildhttp://ficlets.com/authors/artistsrunwild