Comments on 'Vreemdeling'

Comments on 'Vreemdeling' _She_ came with the only bus going in and out of Cage. At 9:28 a.m., March 13, 1986. _She_ had but one suitcase in her hand, and a glare that dared you to ask why. "Hey, you know someplace I can spend the night?" _She_ asked me. "What's your name?" I asked, as if in a trance. "Didn't you hear me? I need some place to stay!" Absentmindedly, I pointed down the road. After _she_ had walked a little while, _she_ turned and yelled something. "What'd she say?" Nigel wrinkled his nose. "Vreemdeling. It's dutch. For stranger." I whispered. "It's dutch for _weirdo_." Nigel isn't one for miracles. 2007-10-30T11:58:47Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/12336 Comment on Vreemdeling <p>Thanks for picking up on that.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/12336?basename=20310 2007-10-30T11:58:47Z Laine the Grey http://ficlets.com/authors/lainegrey Comment on Vreemdeling <p>not to be nit picky but I think you meant “hear” “Didn’t you here me? Not that it changed the story any. You spell better than I do, so no offense meant, I liked the ‘it’s dutch for weirdo’ lol.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/12336?basename=20253 2007-10-29T22:39:03Z SKermitgorf http://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorf