Comments on 'What's the Deal?'I couldn't help it. I laughed. _Laughed_. She had just said one of the most shocking things of my career and I was laughing right in her face. Wow,I must be losing it. "And why would you want to do that,you pretty little thing?" I asked from behind what I hoped was a disarming smile. Hey,smiling isnt easy for me,especially not at 2a.m. I pull out a cig and,still smiling,try to find my zippo. Shit,I can't find it,probobly put it with that goddamn silencer. The woman's eyes narrow,and she gives me a strange look. She suddenly whips her hand out of her pocket,throws a lighter in the air,catches it, and lights my cig all in 1 smooth motion. I rock back slowly,already berating myself for not noticing her hand stray to her pocket. I curse myself silently while I puff on the cigarette. I look at the woman in a new light. Her toned body seems to tighten like a spring when she notices me looking at her.
This was definatley not a woman I would like to mess with.
"So, whats the deal?" I hear myslef say against my will2007-11-15T12:29:13Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/13709Comment on What's the Deal?<p>Very good continuation, especially of the character of the assassin. It’s fun to see where you went and how it diverges from what I was thinking.</p>
<p>LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/13709?basename=232472007-11-15T12:29:13ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on What's the Deal?<p>I’d like to see this continue, but I’m not up to writing a sequel.<br />I’d still like some spacing, and watch your punctuation placement too, please.<br />Good story though.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/13709?basename=230442007-11-14T02:39:13ZFyora Cartaganhttp://ficlets.com/authors/fyoramacraggeComment on What's the Deal?<p>lets keep this rollin,shall we? <br />lol</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/13709?basename=230382007-11-14T02:02:09ZThe Ghost in the Machinehttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_3574