Comments on 'Colors of death'

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2007-05-28T03:41:44Z

Oh my gosh, I love it so much. I’m into the whole thinking thing.

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2007-05-27T20:54:44Z

poor. But makes you think. Work on it.

Comment on Colors of death

2007-05-03T00:05:54Z

This is beautifully written.

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2007-04-28T19:06:11Z

It’s really creative! i love it !

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2007-04-28T06:20:32Z

Nicely done. This is wonderfuly written.

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2007-04-27T01:02:05Z

The tree does look like the log to Six Feet Under. Powerfully written.

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2007-04-26T19:58:58Z

Great, very haunting prose. I hope to see more of your writings.

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2007-04-18T18:12:38Z

Very striking. It’s hard to imagine a life being more vibrant than the photo.

Is it possible to reorder the phrase, “One man, in a box, beneath a tree” to more closely resemble RGB ? Something like, “One heart, beneath a tree, under the heavens”. Or something like that.

As it is the spectral shades of RGB seem to be painting the death of someone else. But of course this is only my interpretation.

Still a wonderful, striking ficlet.

Comment on Colors of death

2007-04-08T10:40:05Z

Very nice. And especially fitting since the tree in the picture does resemble the one from Six Feet Under.