Comments on 'my haiku for *nw challenge coming through!!!'A desperate heave,
in and out at the buzzer,
season gone to waste.
How could she dump me?
I will never love again...
Hey girl whats your name?
Hot chocolate pie,
why can I not resist it,
I hate being fat.
The brothel starts up
new recruits shiver in fear
dirty men begin
a brothel is a whore house for all you who didnt knowhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/14166