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  <title>Comments on 'Scattered Thoughts'</title>
  <subtitle>It's so hard to say good bye,
To leave you standing there,
With a look on your face that will never leave my memory.
It's so hard to tell you how I feel,
Because I don't even know.
The thoughts in my head are all scattered
Like a puzzle only the wise would know the answer to
I miss you
Yet just the same I don't want you 
Why doesn't fate take its toll
Why is it left for me to choose!
I think I love you
But when you're there, I detest you.
Leave me now, before I drive you insane
For I've already driven myself.
Leave me so if its a mistake
I won't be given the blame.
My heart and mind are one,
Even though both are completely different.
And because of this is why my love is undecided.
So go if you must
I will not let you stay 
For I don't know how long I will dwell 
 in this neverending limbo . . . </subtitle>
  <updated>2007-11-24T22:06:23Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Scattered Thoughts</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Yeah, lyrical is a good word for this. I like it a lot!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-11-24T22:06:23Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>someday_93</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Scattered Thoughts</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Nicely done!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/14441?basename=24773</id>
    <published>2007-11-24T17:28:34Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>YodaOnCrack</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Scattered Thoughts</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;There&amp;#8217;s something very lyrical about this poem. Very nice.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-11-24T17:27:04Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Ana Cristina</name>
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