Comments on 'A night at home (vamp. challenge)'"The sweetness was turned to adamantine, heartless cruelty, and the purity to voluptuous wantonness."
Kristine shivered as the movie came to a climax, clutching her bugle bag tightly to her heaving chest.
The house was empty: parents out on a dinner date, brother at a friend's for the night. It was just her, Dracula, a dark comforter enveloping her rigid body, and her bag of junk food. *Crunch* ohh, bugles were good.
Another bag of bugles later...
"My revenge has just begun! I spread it over centuries and time is on my side."
By now, the only reason Kristine was still eating was to give her mouth something to do other than squealing every few minutes.
The moon rose steadily in the sky and, her parents still weren't home. Shadows played along the bare living room walls as Dracula ended, "Bugle fat be gone!" she chanted while marching upstairs. On her way up she glanced her parent's car parked in the driveway, with three figures inside. Two stayed inert, and 1 looked up at her. Shadows tattooing his red eyes2007-12-09T20:34:07Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/15357Comment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>ooooh!!!!!!<br />I like this alot, it DID have a twist ending, lol.<br />Great Read!! SOMEONE SEQUEL IT . I would but I’d prolly ruin it, lol. Good Job anywhowayz!<br />-Bri-on!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=273392007-12-09T20:34:07ZBrebelleshttp://ficlets.com/authors/brebellesComment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>the decription of the Vampire was good at the end and the fact that she was alone in the house made the story eerie before anything scary even happened.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=269972007-12-06T23:35:56ZTad Winslowhttp://ficlets.com/authors/tjdComment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>she’s more of a movie buff. nerdy in her own way :)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=269562007-12-06T19:28:55ZBlossom Ruoqenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/stainedglasstearsComment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>I don’t know why I thought that was so important to know which Dracula movie, other than I think it gives some insight into what kind of person the character is: if it’s a teenage girl at home watching the 1930’s Dracula, I would think she’s a movie buff. If it’s the 70’s version with the ever-so-dreamy Frank Langella, she’s a romantic. If it’s the made-for-TV with Jack Palance, she’s just weird.<br />: )<br />Good job, by the way.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=269512007-12-06T19:11:56ZCrown Me Tarzan, King of Marshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_605Comment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>It would have to be either the 1930’s version or the 1960’s version. To tell you the truth I didn’t give that much thought while writing it, so thank you for bringing that out mr. Tarzan</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=269242007-12-06T17:18:09ZBlossom Ruoqenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/stainedglasstearsComment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>I thought it was great. I was going to go with 5 stars just for the cute picture of an adolescent night alone, sort of a snapshot of life. Then, BAM , twist ending. You got me on that one.</p>
<p>And the number of versions of the tale certainly speak to the resonating power of the vampire fable. And you think you caught a bit of that in this with the ability of the vampire character to rapidly turn the mundane into the horrific.</p>
<p>LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=269232007-12-06T17:15:16ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>Which Dracula? The superior 1930’s Tod Browning/Bela Lugosi version, the 1960’s Christopher Lee, the underrated 1970’s Frank Langella, the made-for-TV Jack Palance or the disappointing 1990’s Francis Ford Coppola edition?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=269122007-12-06T15:24:03ZCrown Me Tarzan, King of Marshttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_605Comment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>I love Bugles. And this is a great story. I give you 5 stars just for the Bugle reference. ;) You know, the first time I watched Dracula, I was in my twenties, and it scared the holy crap outta me! I couldn’t go into my bathroom without opening the shower curtain to be sure the tall Nosferatu wasn’t going to peek out over the top of the curtain. :0</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=269062007-12-06T14:10:41ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenuniqueComment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>Nice, it took me a while to figure out that you meant <em>Bugles</em>. A rather slow start.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=269042007-12-06T13:02:42ZLaine the Greyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/lainegreyComment on A night at home (vamp. challenge)<p>Anyone care to sequel it?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/15357?basename=268972007-12-06T10:54:02ZBlossom Ruoqenhttp://ficlets.com/authors/stainedglasstears