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  <title>Comments on 'That girl'</title>
  <subtitle>she amazed me sometimes.she just stood up for me socked a guy in the nose.
she never yelled,
But she stood up to anyone who thought she was wrong.
she cries when people dont talk to her 
She laughs when you laugh,
 but she worries that she is to loud.
She can do things other people cant but never shows off even when people call her dumb right in front of her face.
She helped me pick up my books when someone threw them down. but pushed me down herself when i yelled at my sister.
She amazes me at moments but then i think Thats the way she is thats why i fell in love</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-12-08T00:43:01Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on That girl</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;What a well-rounded individual, wanting justice for everyone and such strength standing up to her oppressors. You go girl! And good writing, even without all of the punctuation. ;)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-12-08T00:43:01Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Mistress Elsha Hawk</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on That girl</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;lack of punctuation made for an interesting read. ;]&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;that is scarily similar to a character i&amp;#8217;ve written about in a (non-Ficlets) story. whoa.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;nice job&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;~e&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/15453?basename=27141</id>
    <published>2007-12-08T00:38:18Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>emma jo_234</name>
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