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  <title>Comments on 'The Promise 3'</title>
  <subtitle>The seconds count down like rainfall from an endless grey sky.
It's not enough. There's never enough.
I could spend a lifetime lost in this sweet embrace-
An eternity counting the gentle beats of your tender heart
As it lay softly pressed against mine.
I could spend forever in this moment,
And still it would not be enough.
I held you in my arms with a kiss gently placed against your ear-
Not having the strength to look into your sad sullen eyes-
And whispered, with slow quivering lips:
&amp;quot;Two years. Here. Again, in two years.&amp;quot;
...
Like fingertips tracing an unseen path down the side of my face,
I felt your tears.
The words you spoke barely audible,
But so filled with pain and heartache:
&amp;quot;Promise. Promise me.&amp;quot;
And so I did.
And so it was,
My last gift to you,
A promise.

Do you remember?</subtitle>
  <updated>2007-12-12T23:58:37Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on The Promise 3</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;This is all so sweet and emotional. Please say they reunite?&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-12-12T23:58:37Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>KasumiRose</name>
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  <entry>
    <title type="text">Comment on The Promise 3</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Oh&amp;#8230;did they come back? In two years? These are beautiful, they nearly made me cry!&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2007-12-12T16:19:46Z</published>
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      <name>someday_93</name>
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