Comments on 'Yet to be Titled'

Comments on 'Yet to be Titled' "You can't you just can't!" Ashleigh cried "I want to stay with you!" She said again "Ashleigh can't you just cooperate for once, I can't change their minds" Ashleigh's mom yelled. "It's time for her to go." They said "Mom nooo!!" 1 Week Before "Ashleigh, can you please pay attention for once?" the teacher asked "ASHLEIGH!" The teacher slowly walked towards Ashleigh. And she stopped dead in her tracks once she saw Ashleigh's arm. "You all can go out to recess." The teacher said with a somber look on her face. "Ashleigh, Dear please wake up." "What? Is it time for recess already?" Ashleigh said. "Ashleigh, What happened to your arm?" "Uh, I just tripped on the sidewalk while I was walking home. It's nothing big. Can I go now?" Ashleigh said. "Ashleigh, Just know that if there is anything...anything you want to talk about..I'm here." "Well I do kind of have this problem with my mom........" 2007-12-16T21:51:20Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/16055 Comment on Yet to be Titled <p>Interesting and certainly a touch of teh tragic. Just a little bit of confusion from time to time about who is talking, especially with the second statement coming after the identifier.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/16055?basename=28591 2007-12-16T21:51:20Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477