Comments on 'Light up the Sky'"Baby, *let me light up the sky, light it up for you-*"
"Just *take me away from this empty apartment*"
"If only you'd *let me tell you why I would die for you*... *if ever you loved me you'd say it's okay*..."
"*Everything has changed since we were kids*," she cried out, then stopped. Her voice lowered as she spoke again, with a sadness, an edge that betrayed her *shadows and regrets* of the past, "*we were the best of friends,*" her voice broke on the last word as she choked back the tears
Taking advantage of the emotion in her voice he started again, this time pleading: "*When you're all alone with the melody will close your eyes and think of me? Try and put aside our history*. Babe, *you were the reason I survived*"
"Then *where did you go? I waited here, you never showed*"
"Not *everything has changed, I'm the same boy that stood by the sea*"
Face blank, no more tears "*this is just a matter of me getting what I need. I'm tired of you and me. When the secret's safe... then I'm gone*"2008-01-02T22:50:06Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/17362Comment on Light up the Sky<p>Never heard of the band, but it made for a moving little interaction between the two. And ditto to Saint Chuck’s comment. I think the last line made the whole story.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/17362?basename=322852008-01-02T22:50:06ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Light up the Sky<p>Love it, the last line especially. Makes you think that there’s more to it than just a simple relationship.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/17362?basename=322012008-01-02T19:43:57ZSaint Chuckhttp://ficlets.com/authors/chuck_theloveComment on Light up the Sky<p>Wow, this has a lot of emotion, I like this a lot. Good job!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/17362?basename=321582008-01-02T15:54:40Zflute faeriehttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_6061Comment on Light up the Sky<p>light up the sky..<br />is a magnificent song.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/17362?basename=321122008-01-02T07:27:36ZRunningWithScissorshttp://ficlets.com/authors/hopeless_x0Comment on Light up the Sky<p>All are Yellowcard lyrics (in order):</p>
<p>Light Up the Sky<br />Empty Apartment<br />Light Up the Sky<br />Shadows and Regrets<br />Five Becomes Four<br />Life of a Salesman<br />International Date Line (I am Gone)</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/17362?basename=321112008-01-02T07:22:22ZFlirtingWithaBrickWallhttp://ficlets.com/authors/sanitytookaholiday