You think you can look at your phone and hit *Ignore* beacuse you chose how I feel, like I'm your miniature *whore*. And I need an exact date when my love became a *bore*, when my devotion was no longer enough and you needed *more*. And darling, go ahead and walk out but only if you're *sure* because when that *door* closes behind you, it won't be opening to your key *anymore*. You got your friends all thinking I'm some kind of *stalker* because here I stand an excessive *talker*. But here and now these words I dare not *speak* will from my pen to the paper *leak*. So when one morn you open your *eyes* and suddenly you remember all your &quot;white&quot; *lies* and remember my screams and all of my *cries* for you and your love that just siddenly *dies*. Tell me baby didn't you see whe best is yet to *come* and that your love and *hate* just doesn't *equate* and comes to a sum of _one in a million is that you used to *be* but now you are nothing, no, nothing to *me*_. 2008-01-15T02:34:33Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/17789 <p>&#8220;hell hath no fury like a woman scorned&#8221;</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/17789?basename=34609 2008-01-15T02:34:33Z Culture Shock w/ Mike Schwartz http://ficlets.com/authors/mike_schwartz <p>wrath, scorned, angry, powerful</p> <p>All these words come to mind when reading this. It is filled with emotion. I&#8217;m so glad you chose to make the rhyming words bold, the end of the stanzas if this were a rap or poem. It punctuated it and made it sing.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/17789?basename=34212 2008-01-13T02:31:28Z Mistress Elsha Hawk http://ficlets.com/authors/mistress_elsha_hawk <p>whooooooooooooooooaaaaaa.<br /> raw and refreshing. :]</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/17789?basename=33163 2008-01-07T00:03:51Z RunningWithScissors http://ficlets.com/authors/hopeless_x0 <p>Awesome I love the emotion of this one.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/17789?basename=33125 2008-01-06T21:37:26Z KasumiRose http://ficlets.com/authors/kasumirose