Comments on 'Indecent Intent 3 (Melia and Tad Winslow's Collaboration)'The tinge of fear transforms into lust on its way down her spine, collecting behind her belly button like a bath is drawing hot water there.
He's really close to her now.
"And what is it I need?" She whispers instinctually sensual.
His confidence is stunning. "Me," he says, leaning in, barely touching his lips to hers.
The warmth in her stomach spreads, leaking down. Wet.
_This is utterly unfathomable_ she thinks. _I really do want him._
Suddenly, she grabs the boy by the ear, "ow, oww, ahh, ahhhh," he lets out. She pulls him into her house and shuts the door.
Once inside she promptly releases him, panting as she explains. "I saw Anne Trapnel (breath) watching us through her window (breath) she's an incredible gossip (breath)
I *had* to do *something.*"
"Jesus, you nearly ripped my ear off. I'm bleeding for Christ's sake."
"Oh honey, I'm sorry." Her tone is soft and nurturing as she lends the back of her hand to the side of his cheek. 2008-01-17T18:02:16Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/18577Comment on Indecent Intent 3 (Melia and Tad Winslow's Collaboration)<p>Okay, bordering on soft core here, but very well written, especially that first paragraph. I’m so going to get nailed for reading this at work, guys!<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/18577?basename=349992008-01-17T18:02:16ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Indecent Intent 3 (Melia and Tad Winslow's Collaboration)<p>...This…is…amazing…<br />I love it.<br />Please continue.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/18577?basename=348062008-01-16T14:31:35ZFyora Cartaganhttp://ficlets.com/authors/fyoramacragge