Comments on 'Just For Now, I Promise'Right now there's no hope
You're hurt everywhere you go,
You cannot call your house a home
You'll find but misery and woe.
Own flesh and blood hurt you
There is no haven left to hide in
At the age you currently are
Life seems a game you cannot win.
Deary, that's just it though
You are so young and so kind,
You've got strength you don't even know of
Most of it you still need to find.
There are so many years ahead of you
Now is no time to lose fidelity
Sing your own song, to your own beat
It's your life - make up the melody.2008-01-25T23:09:00Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/19244Comment on Just For Now, I Promise<p>i love the last line!!!</p>
<p><em>“It’s your life – make up the melody.”</em></p>
<p>Beautiful!!!!</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19244?basename=365242008-01-25T23:09:00ZPhosphate11http://ficlets.com/authors/phosphate11Comment on Just For Now, I Promise<p>Yeah this little poem really makes me feel comforted. Thanks so much <strong>hug</strong> <strong>cries</strong></p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19244?basename=365072008-01-25T21:53:05ZKasumiRosehttp://ficlets.com/authors/kasumiroseComment on Just For Now, I Promise<p>Really good, I actually felt like somebody was telling me this to comfort me about something. So you’ve got good writing style.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19244?basename=364882008-01-25T21:03:35ZSunEyedGirlhttp://ficlets.com/authors/litoComment on Just For Now, I Promise<p>i agree, white – i’m still hesitant to go in the non-rhymey way, though. Crying Left was my first ever poem without rhyming, so i’m guessing i should go a little more in that direction..?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19244?basename=364842008-01-25T20:59:10ZOne Time, One Chancehttp://ficlets.com/authors/one_chanceComment on Just For Now, I Promise<p>I’m not sure your rhyme scheme adds anything here.</p>
<p>Still, not bad.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19244?basename=364822008-01-25T20:55:31ZWhite Hathttp://ficlets.com/authors/whitehatComment on Just For Now, I Promise<p>Oh, oh oh. It’s beautiful, positively beautiful. I cried. I…I don’t know what to say.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19244?basename=364812008-01-25T20:51:12Zsomeday_93http://ficlets.com/authors/someday_93