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  <title>Comments on 'Caution'</title>
  <subtitle>I fell for hours.

This is not hyperbole. I was not in space. Not technically.

Imagine a giant sphere as thick as a planet surrounding a star with a radius that puts its inner surface at a habitable distance. Pour enough air into it to give the inner surface a decent atmosphere, and you have enough habitation space for the population of a whole galaxy. This is a Dyson sphere.

Now imagine an army of robotic construction vehicles launched to build these in advance for settlers from an overpopulated empire of Dyson spheres. Imagine these construction vehicles hunting down black holes and ripping them apart for building materials.

Now imagine this gets out of hand. That shouldn't be a stretch.

Eventually, the whole damn galaxy is covered in giant metal scaffolding and junk. A contiguous, semirigid structure, most of it filled with air and an infinite variety of life.

In such a place, you're bound to find doors without warning labels in your language.

&amp;quot;_Caution, open transit shaft_!&amp;quot; would have been so nice.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-01-30T23:14:58Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Caution</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Maybe, but I would think wind noise might pose a problem, depending on what sort of transit shaft it was.&lt;/p&gt;


	&lt;p&gt;I&amp;#8217;d like to think he survived somehow and related this later.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-01-30T23:14:58Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>White Hat</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Caution</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;So, was the protagonist dictating this as he fell? :)&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-01-30T21:53:46Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Barry</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Caution</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;It has a great opening line, and I love how you leave it by itself. It needs no accompaniment and urges the reader on. Great work.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-01-26T19:58:43Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>&#9824;Ana Cristina&#9829;</name>
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