Comments on 'Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]'I stared at the doll.
She stared at me.
Oh, how i hate that doll.
She reminds me of everything i hate.
That doll, the one that won't stop staring at me, was a present from my mother. I hated my mother. No i really hated my mother. She treated me like a baby. Always hugging me and telling me how she would always be there for me. The liar. Where is she now? She is now in the formless void that many people call heaven. This doll is all that is left of the sickening woman. I want to throw the thing across the room and hopefully take my life with it. But dad probably wouldn't let me. How had he loved her? She was such a horrible woman. He actually cried during the funeral. For me she couldn't have died sooner. That woman was using up our money. At least we didn't have any other memories of her. No photos no portraits just the stupid doll.
I miss my mother.2008-02-05T22:21:57Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/19834Comment on Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]<p>And a good description of the most complicated type of grieving, getting over the loss of someone for whom we have conflicted emotions. Very easy to grieve for someone you truly and wholly hate, but that smidgen of missing, that shadow of love, causes more turmoil than anything. Well done.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19834?basename=389322008-02-05T22:21:57ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]<p>This is really good. Other than what everyone else has already mentioned (which can be corrected with an edit) Overflowing with emotion.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19834?basename=384932008-02-03T09:29:55ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenuniqueComment on Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]<p>its a she</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19834?basename=381062008-02-01T19:02:58ZBlood Red Skyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/bloodredskyComment on Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]<p>A few misspellings, and I think some sections would benefit by being broken up into separate paragraphs, but it’s very powerful.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19834?basename=381002008-02-01T18:41:45ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78Comment on Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]<p>aww thats sad too. i think he’s hiding it, like its easier to hate her than to miss her</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19834?basename=380982008-02-01T18:37:34Zwytherwingshttp://ficlets.com/authors/wytherwingsComment on Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]<p>anger,such hate.. then surprise the love comes through impressive writting.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19834?basename=380202008-02-01T05:17:13ZSKermitgorfhttp://ficlets.com/authors/kermitgorfComment on Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]<p>yes it was</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19834?basename=379732008-02-01T03:20:26ZBlood Red Skyhttp://ficlets.com/authors/bloodredskyComment on Hate is such a strong word[A Picture is Worth a Thousand Characters... challenge]<p>“That woman was using up or money.”</p>
<p>im guessing that is a typo</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/19834?basename=379712008-02-01T03:19:02ZACORNhttp://ficlets.com/authors/acorn360