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  <subtitle>My onomatopoeia poem for school hope you like
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Summer Boredom

Click! Pssshh! Nothing is on,
But what do I expect, its dawn.

Sigh, yawn. Nothing to do
I wonder if they&#8217;re back from the zoo.

Thump, splat. Why do I bother?
No use cleaning my room only to be criticized by my father.

Bang! Crash! I lose.
I might blow a fuse.

Pitter patter, ssshhh. The window is wet.
I hate the sprinklers, to turn them off I always forget.

Flip, flip. I&#8217;m on page twenty-four
Man I hate books on war.

Rustle, pat. So much for summer bliss
And to think I still have three months of this.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-02-05T22:48:39Z</updated>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Very nice,really.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-05T22:48:39Z</published>
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      <name>I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Summer Boredom[a Poem]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;yay!!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-04T05:09:28Z</published>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Summer Boredom[a Poem]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;sure&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-04T01:56:17Z</published>
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      <name>Blood Red Sky</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Summer Boredom[a Poem]</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;lol i like it.&lt;br /&gt;hey can i sequel with mine from school??&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-03T21:27:03Z</published>
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