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  <title>Comments on 'Frost Peacock{2}'</title>
  <subtitle>The pen scratched away.
_My name is Ixy the Snow People's word for Icicle Dove. 
It all started when the Blood Snow fell. It is a blizzard of red snow that happens every thousand years. I was out gathering frost berries, when the sky rained blood. I ran for my life, but of course I couldn't get home. My white country turned red. I got covered with it. My people's snow, icicle blue, and silver hair is famous. I sport the snow white hair. But now it was turned a sunset pink. My snow rabbit cloak was also stained. It dripped in my eyes. Trickled in my throat and nose choking me. And I felt it slime down my spine. I found a small cave. Wiping my eyes I curled up and waited._ The pen wrote.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-02-09T13:58:55Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Frost Peacock{2}</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;The story within a story works well here, giving an added sense of urgency as we want to know both what she&amp;#8217;s writing about and where she is now to be writing this so sadly.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-09T13:58:55Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>THX 0477</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Frost Peacock{2}</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;oo. you must continue. it&amp;#8217;s getting good E, this is gonna be intense, i can feel it&amp;#8230;&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-09T03:14:53Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>heartbeats echocho</name>
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