The darkness seemed to breathe down her neck and fondle with her hair. It slid down here cheek and over her quivering jaw. _Oh my god-_ she whispered to no one in particular but was cut off by the footfall outside the door. The air continued to caress her during the eternity it took for the next thump to reverberate the floor beneath her. Her muscles shook from fatigue and her breathing raspy but she fought to keep herself quiet as a mouse. Her heart pounded under her bloodstained shirt; her body threatening to throw up. _Please, god save me from this!_ She clung to the wrist of her wounded had to ease her rocking as the handle turned slowly...slowly. The light burst into the room in a sliver that ran across her knee. She caught her breath as her son stood silhouetted in the doorway. &quot;No...&quot; Her hand reached for his, the one without the knife (she had used that knife to cut his birthday cake) and sobs heaved her chest. Her eyes spilled salty tears down her chin; fear tore at her face... 2008-02-19T07:32:44Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/20493 <p>i havent seen that but il have to lol!!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20493?basename=42248 2008-02-19T07:32:44Z Geheim Sir Ayita http://ficlets.com/authors/stephdoir <p>Dude. That&#8217;s twisted. I love it.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20493?basename=42028 2008-02-18T13:00:47Z flute faerie http://ficlets.com/authors/user_6061 <p>I liked the feeling of the darkness being alive. It kind of reminded me of that movie, House on Haunted Hill or another with a similar title. Where the womans hair starts to braid itself.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20493?basename=40069 2008-02-10T09:56:20Z Tarmaie http://ficlets.com/authors/tarmaie <p>Good, solid creep facture and then <strong> BAM </strong> extra creepy and icky with the idea of it beign her own son suddenly gone psychotic and murderous.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20493?basename=39583 2008-02-08T19:08:23Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 <p>very powerful, very creepy. again, a horrid concept to grasp. but it is well written and definitely scary.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20493?basename=39554 2008-02-08T16:17:50Z `crayola. http://ficlets.com/authors/nectarine