Hurt, Sorrow, Pain, Tears, These are lovers greatest fears. It's sugar coated so we don't know. Like gummy bears, we see no foe. I'd like to say it's all smiles and daises. But man this love stuff can drive us all crazy. Have you ever watched the one you love, love someone else? How could the answer ever be no, that's all life is. Constant disappointment. And when you see them together, your heart sinks, and you want to be done with love forever. But every time he says your name, do your eyes shine, showing your excitement? Does your stomach flip with anticipation? Love is dark, but love is bright. And one day, someday, when you find that one, the one worthy of _love_... Your world will shine. Your heart will race. You'll know... it's love But until then... Constant disappointment Hurt, Sorrow, Pain, Tears, These are lovers greatest fears... 2008-02-10T15:25:38Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/20573 <p>Awesome</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20573?basename=40094 2008-02-10T15:25:38Z SocccerISmyLIFE http://ficlets.com/authors/pink <p>Awwwwww! SAD !!! BUT GREAT !</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20573?basename=39802 2008-02-09T05:10:50Z Sailor Emo http://ficlets.com/authors/live_2_love <p>I like the change of mood from beginning, to middle, and then back to sadness at the end. I, too, appreciated the repition. Totally tied the piece together. <br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20573?basename=39797 2008-02-09T04:55:28Z Storykeeper of Fae http://ficlets.com/authors/smile <p>awww!!! so true, is mostly constantly disappointment</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20573?basename=39763 2008-02-09T03:33:44Z Blusparrow http://ficlets.com/authors/blusparrow <p>Great job with the repetition at the beginning and end. I thought the gummi bear line was pretty funny too. The whole thing has a neat mixture of hope and, well, constant disappointment.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20573?basename=39762 2008-02-09T03:33:32Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477