Comments on '1:00 in the am' Staring at the moniter, I have nothing else to do. Well, maybe I do. Bed. But the thought of fighting with the sheets and punching my pillows doesn't sound comforting. Not now, not ever. Besides, the bed would just win the fight... I stare at the clock on the screen in front of me. 1:00am. Time sure flies...when you're all alone. Yes _all alone_. Even my mind has deserted me. _Now where was I? oh yes._ Alone.the souns of t hekeyboard playa mel odyas I try nott oallasle ep . The annoying sound of the neighbors ratty car trying to start woke me up. Hmhmm I don't remember falling asleep. I blink up at the moniter that wakes up as well as I nudge the mouse. I glance at the words typed on the screen. Somewhere between the last sentence and this morning, my mind must have returned. I yawned as I frowned, muttering curses at the stupid car next door. I hit the backspace key till the screen was blank, then I crawled into my bed. No fighting awaited me, just down feathers &amp; cold sheets...I'm not alone now. 2008-02-09T22:44:02Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/20586 Comment on 1:00 in the am <p>hahaha dude seriously i wrote this @ 1 in the morning last night&#8230;uh&#8230;this morning. i kinda read it for the first time two minuets ago&#8230;the ending is kinda rushed.<br />this kid isn&#8217;t alone anymore b/c the down comforters were finally comfortable. and sleep was avalible instead of a &#8216;fight&#8217;...or something like that. lol thanks for the coments though<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20586?basename=39957 2008-02-09T22:44:02Z heartbeats echocho http://ficlets.com/authors/luseane1492 Comment on 1:00 in the am <p>Wait, why isn&#8217;t the person alone? I liked the whole bit about falling asleep. Took me a sec to realize you hadn&#8217;t just made a bunch of typos.<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20586?basename=39835 2008-02-09T12:33:26Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477 Comment on 1:00 in the am <p>ohh i love down comforters&#8230; cozy goodness!</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/20586?basename=39815 2008-02-09T10:06:01Z Apostrophe http://ficlets.com/authors/murphyrose27