Comments on 'Renard Versus Renard'Within Renard's usually solitary mind a great debate raged, leaving him stupefied and silent on the outside.
"You fool! What have you gotten yourself into? This woman is mad."
"But she's hot!"
"Mad!"
"Hot!"
"Gun!"
"Acceptable counter measures for a desperate situation."
"Oh, the judge will love that line, I'm sure. You know what happens to guys like me in prison."
"But you also know what happens to the hero at the end of the story...with the damsel in distress. You know."
"Oh brilliant justification. Since when do we think below the belt?"
"Since when have we not?"
"She'll chew you up and spit you out before you know what happened."
"Yeah, but it'll sure be fun."
"Put the gun down and leave."
"Keep it. Save the girl. Be the man. Save the day."
Izzy waved her hand and gave an impatient look, shaking Renard from his self vs. self argument, "Eh Bonito, we're going, agora. Foda y..." She went on to mumble something else, and Renard was left to stuff the debated gun in his pocket and follow.2008-02-22T01:34:43Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/21895Comment on Renard Versus Renard<p>hahahaha. “This woman is mad!” “But she’s hot!” That’s great.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/21895?basename=428412008-02-22T01:34:43Zemma jo_234http://ficlets.com/authors/emmajComment on Renard Versus Renard<p>sequeled it. i find its becoming more and more easy to sequel things as of late.</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/21895?basename=426512008-02-21T05:49:44ZNouvelle Bardothttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_bardotComment on Renard Versus Renard<p>I love it! The internal dialogue is very typical, but funny and so very Renard. Ah, foda, a word I commonly use…and yes, the Portuguesa was mad brilliante.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/21895?basename=426332008-02-21T04:50:15ZNouvelle Bardothttp://ficlets.com/authors/user_bardotComment on Renard Versus Renard<p>Love the internal debate. And you did a great job capturing Izzy’s impatient, impulsive nature.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/21895?basename=426222008-02-21T03:45:50ZAna Cristinahttp://ficlets.com/authors/asimon78