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  <title>Comments on 'Color My World'</title>
  <subtitle>Now spread out - the pencils
Now twirl - ruby-red
and color it - for 
the sky - instead.

Now peer out - the window
stare into - the world
let imagination - loose
in the day - unfurled.

Color me - softly,
color me, - dear
paint - the universe
in every shade - here.

Now select - a new color
you've got many - true, 
and scratch in - the grass
in a young shade - of blue.

Color me - softly
color me - light
sketch - a world shifting
through day - and night.

If your pencils - break
I'll buy you - some new
never lose sight, - dear
'cause I - love you.

Through your fingers, - sweet,
The pencils, they - twirled,
color, my darling
color my world.</subtitle>
  <updated>2008-02-24T22:29:12Z</updated>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Color My World</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;That was beautiful.  Amazingly so.&lt;br /&gt;LoA&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-24T22:29:12Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Storykeeper of Fae</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Color My World</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;See,you are a great writer,&lt;br /&gt;Very good.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
    <id>http://ficlets.com/stories/22390?basename=43614</id>
    <published>2008-02-24T21:49:43Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Color My World</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Love love love it.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-24T21:42:10Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>[pens&amp;feathers]</name>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Color My World</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Wow. This is a great poem.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <published>2008-02-24T21:22:48Z</published>
    <author>
      <name>Vertically Challenged</name>
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