Comments on 'Reasons To Live'I decided to let my more rational voice guide me, but we suddenly weren't on speaking terms. That left me and Mr. No-Guts-No-Glory to determine my dialogue.
My day was _so_ going downhill fast.
"Come on," my inner Rambo said. "Give'im what for and let's get going!"
_*I would suggest you silence that particular aspect of your personality,*_ the dragon thought.
"Sorry," I said, suddenly feeling very naked. Which I was, but now I consciously _knew_ it. "Uh, I was wondering if I could get past you, please." See. Even without my rational voice, I could be polite!
_*Now,_ why _would I want to do that?*_
"Well," I said. "Good question. And I have a very good answer." I did? "You see. Uh..." _Think!_ "Well, you know who's at the end of this path, right?"
It had the good grace to roll it's eyes. _*Of_ course, _I do.*_
"Well, I'm going to see him... Her? Anyway, I'm going there, and he/she will be very upset if I'm late."
_*Ah, you have an appointment.*_
"Not really..." Oops.
_*Then they won't miss you.*_2008-03-01T13:03:44Zhttp://ficlets.com/feed/story/22464Comment on Reasons To Live<p>Oh, I see the dragon did not give away the gender of the mysterious, “who is at the end of the path.” Interesting. Hmm… I like this… more and more…</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/22464?basename=448482008-03-01T13:03:44ZJenuniquehttp://ficlets.com/authors/jenuniqueComment on Reasons To Live<p>I like that you kept consistent with the telepathic aspect, ie the dragon catching the thought process. And very funny ‘oops’ there.<br />LoA</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/22464?basename=437502008-02-25T17:20:38ZTHX 0477http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477Comment on Reasons To Live<p>totaly cool what happens next?</p>http://ficlets.com/stories/22464?basename=437432008-02-25T15:49:25ZEmhttp://ficlets.com/authors/vamem