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  <subtitle>I heard breathing outside in the hall way.

I closed my eyes praying that who ever it was would not come into my parents room.

I held my breath as I heard him open the door to the bedroom.

&amp;quot;Carolyn, where are you don't make me look , I don't like it when people make me look!&amp;quot;

A females voice called him from down stairs. I could not make out his name the sound was muffled, he left the room and shut the door.

I ran to the window to see how far up I was. I thought if I climbed onto the roof, I could stay there until help came.

No luck, the roof was very slanted on this side of the house. I continued to search for the key to the gun case. I peep outside of the bedroom door over the stair case rails.

I could see shadow's moving about down stairs. The whispering was loud.

It's only two people a female and a male. The woman was doing all the talking. Then it hit me I know who the female is, she kept saying that they had to finish it, and make sure my body is never found.

I ran to my ....
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    <title type="text">Comment on Rude and Crude Valentines Day (part 6)</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;Keep going, keep going!!!!!!&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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    <author>
      <name>I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!</name>
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