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  <subtitle>&amp;quot;Elves have good hearing, but I have better. An elf and a demon combined into one body has its advantages,&amp;quot; Aphra smiled wolfishly. She clacked her fangs together. The student shivered. 
&amp;quot;Next time you decide to gossip like a bunch of ninnies, do it i front of me,&amp;quot; Aphra glared at him with her cat-like eyes. They glimmered with a deep amber color. Her pupils were slits of ebony black. Looking into them, you could completely lose yourself.

And then, with a clack of her boots, Aphra was floating down the hall again, her ghostly hair floating behind her.

The student collapsed where he stood.
&amp;quot;Hey!&amp;quot; his friend said, &amp;quot;Are you O.K.?&amp;quot;
&amp;quot;I've never sensed such an aura,&amp;quot; the student said, holding his head. &amp;quot;It was so powerful it made me dizzy.&amp;quot;

Aphra was guided to her room by a dojo caretaker. She bowed a brief thank you and went into her room.

She closed the door behind her and undressed.
She put on a flowing white robe, and tied a black sash at her waist.

She pulled out her swords.</subtitle>
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    <title type="text">Comment on Arrival</title>
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    <content type="html">&lt;p&gt;smashing installment, awesome dialogue.&lt;/p&gt;</content>
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      <name>Kermitgorf</name>
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