Standing tall in disrepair It doesnt care It's just a wall No one notices it standing there. No one would panic were it to fall. It's just a wall Solitary and cracked. The church towers above Everything the wall lacked. They're kind of like us the buildings you see? They all have imperfections and a purpose, or three. Sometimes the goal is hidden from view sometimes it's obvious what it's supposed to do. Whatever it does, it's not very long Before nature brings down concrete, no longer strong. 2008-03-08T04:22:33Z http://ficlets.com/feed/story/22922 <p>yes i echo everything said before me. lol<br />great in-sight and i loved how you &#8216;matched&#8217; (thanks butterflygirl :]) humans to a wall&#8230;<br />oh here&#8217;s something original (i just thought it&#8230;)<br />wicked awesome! lol<br />LoA</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/22922?basename=46454 2008-03-08T04:22:33Z heartbeats echocho http://ficlets.com/authors/luseane1492 <p>Good in-sight matching human <br />imperfections to a wall and still having a purpose.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/22922?basename=44809 2008-03-01T02:50:14Z butterflygirl6106 http://ficlets.com/authors/butterflygirl6106 <p>Very nice, gradual set up for your analogy and then carried through to being more about the wall at the end again. Nicely done.</p> http://ficlets.com/stories/22922?basename=44801 2008-03-01T02:07:45Z THX 0477 http://ficlets.com/authors/thx_0477